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Hello, this is my First post on Alt. History forums and is about my Alt. timeline of the Novel that i'm writing so it'll have some changes after but i wanna show to you some things that happen on this timeline. I'm sorry for the text a little pointless since I just played it on google translator and copied the translation to paste here because I'm out of time to edit the translation meticulously. :) Hope you enjoy it.

In February 1915 during World War I, an Alien object crashes in Central Franconia in Germany and soon this object is studied by German scientists unraveling various mysteries about deep space as new technologies have been discovered. One of these technologies drew much attention from the Kaiser because it would allow its ships to "fly", a kind of engine called by the Germans of "Gegenschwerkraft" that "Generated" a gravitational Repulsion that depending on the power could make a great ship fly above the clouds, Using Of Reverse Technology using the engine found on the object and installing it on the Battlecruiser SMS Seydlitz being repaired at the Imperial yard (Kaiserliche Werf Wilhelmshaven) after the Battle of Dogger Bank. His Tests began in November 1915 which drew the attention of several British spies who said that the "Terror" was in German hands, and in February of the following year during the Battle of Verdun was commenced Operation "Schwalbenfisch" the Cruiser Of flying-capable combat came into play showing it to be as effective with its firepower as with its armor that was made to handle much larger artillery shots than those used on land against Infantry just as the Airplanes could do nothing against the Ship , And quickly France fell to the German Empire. At the end of the same year the British, having seen to their disadvantage ordered the construction of a coastal defense with several cannons capable of drilling the Armor of the Seydlitz ashore, one of them Was the BL 18 "Mk I designed initially to equip The Battlecruiser HMS Furious would be the only alternative to stop the German "Terror", however due to the rapid German advance, the line of defense was not completed and much of the Projets were transported to the United States that went to war against Germany and built a strong Defense On its east coast preparing for an eventual German landing which occurred in 1918 shortly after the German Empire Defeated the Russian Empire and dominated all of Europe in the same year and also taken possession of most of the Colonies of the great European powers.Some South American Countries Allied to the Germans Contributing to the success of the German landing on the east coast of the United States President Woodrow Wilson Financed a coup d'etat in mexico taking possession of his army as well as formed an alliance with some countries of Latin America aimed at protecting the Panama Canal and Oceania that became known as the American Resistance, Much of the American fleet had been transferred to the Pacific After the German conquest of Cuba, the Germans formed a naval blockade with submarines to prevent a counter attack by the Americans, but in 1920 the Japanese Empire and Chinese Empire unite and form the Pacific Entente combining Several countries of the Pacific against Western imperialist rule in their countries declaring war on both the German Empire and the American Resistance, attacking and invading the naval base of Pearl Habor as well as invading Russia and other countries dominated by the German Empire for the decade Of 1920 was known as the Crazy 20's since the world was in immense chaos. Still in 1920 during the research on the object had discovered an anomaly that affected some people mostly women, what briefly became known as Extra-Terrestrial Anger, which culminated for the most religious Catholics to Make a Levante against the German Empire claiming that the Kaiser Would have made a pact with the demon, that uprising had been repressed in 1922 but after this event several European leaders demanded explanations on the object and raised questions about the ambitions of the Kaiser. In 1927, when the war ended with the German victory that now dominates the world, the Kaiser and a good part of his research team explained and showed to Publico the result of the research on the object containing many secrets and mysteries of a great civilization beyond Of the stars, roeveland to the world that a divided Civilization will only self-destruct in Wars by resources and honor and only a United Civilization can Progress to achieve progress. In 1929 A conference was organized with several leaders representing various countries around the world with the aim of sub-dividing German rule by dividing the administration of regions into 7 blocks later 8 after the American crisis of 1943. All sub-divisions of the German empire were Administered by Regents of each nation, representatives of ethnic groups and the Deputy King representing the greater German Kaiser in the mairia of subdivisions that were not directly administered by the Kaiser.

Okay That is all for now so, it's only a part of the world history my novel project will not focus on the world so i started improve the world history and i reach a point that i get the idea to post it here to see what you guys think.
 

nbcman

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OK the Germans have a wonder ship or a series of wonder ships. But their infantry is still bog standard and infantry wins wars and occupies nations.

Japan and China were not going to make nice in the early 1900s or anytime after the first Sino-Japanese War. And even if they did, they didn't have a navy that could invade all the way to the Hawaiian islands. Plus they had bigger problems as you said they declared war on the Graviton Germans-wouldn't the Germans simply brush them aside as they have everyone else in this wank?

EDIT: If you want to develop it further, you may want to have this thread moved to the Writers Forum so you can work on the story while not having to work as hard on the plausibility of the story
 
OK the Germans have a wonder ship or a series of wonder ships. But their infantry is still bog standard and infantry wins wars and occupies nations.

Japan and China were not going to make nice in the early 1900s or anytime after the first Sino-Japanese War. And even if they did, they didn't have a navy that could invade all the way to the Hawaiian islands. Plus they had bigger problems as you said they declared war on the Graviton Germans-wouldn't the Germans simply brush them aside as they have everyone else in this wank?

EDIT: If you want to develop it further, you may want to have this thread moved to the Writers Forum so you can work on the story while not having to work as hard on the plausibility of the story
Oh sorry i've posted in wrong topic again... like allways :p Anyway, so the germans just stuck and dont defeat them all at once because the tecnology only makes the ship float so it's Litteraly an Airship not so fast and guns cant aim right to ground units at close range and the seydlitz is the only one with Antigravity Engine they just remove from object and put on the ship... I know that the tension between Japan and china could be a problem but i need to tink about it if they unite in peace or some kind of movement uprise against it since the british and other countries lose strenght in asia since the germans defeat them China invade they possesions on china and japan broke relations with the entente, i still thinking about it.
 
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