Al Grito de Guerra: the Second Mexican Revolution

This TL is absolutely excellent, talking about an oft-ignored nation in AH with an extreme depth of detail that teaches the reader about the PRI's vile machinations and other stuff about Mexican history. Often, wikibox TLs are written with wikiboxes as the main thing and the writing as simply stuff to fill in the gaps between the wikiboxes; this TL, on the other hand, focuses on the writing first and the wikiboxes are made around them. As it should be.

In regards to the last couple updates - the 1994 election reminds me very much (as some people said) of the Indian election of 1977. Specifically, referring to it as a revolution reminds me of the people who referred to the 1977 Indian election as a "second independence", or a "second revolution", or a "revolution at the ballot box". Of course it ultimately didn't turn out that way, but the INC in 1977 was way stronger than the PRI here, it doesn't look like the PRI has a figure with Indira Gandhi's stature, and even if the opposition collapses in bickering like the Janata Party it seems unlikely the PRI can use the split to take back power.

With the last bit of writing, I did feel sympathy for Bartlett despite his sheer tyranny, and that does say a lot about the sheer strength of your writing. This is definitely the sort of thing that may cause the violence the TL's title refers to.
 
Here is a video made during the election of 1988 that documents the accusations of fraud up until early September 1988.

I thought about translating all of it, but realized that the transcript would not fit in one post and would take too long.

Chronicle of a Fraud (1988)

Highlights:
@2:53-4:47: All presidential candidates during the election; Carlos Salinas de Gortari (PRI), Manuel Clouthier (PAN), and Cuauhtémoc Cárdenas (FDN)
@11:37: On June 3rd, Heberto Castillo, candidate for the Mexican Socialist Party (PMS), declines his candidacy and supports Cárdenas.
@14:30: Cárdenas gives a speech to various audiences around Mexico about how the Revolution's goals should be actualized.
@15:55-24:43: On July 2nd, the PRI and PAN candidates go to the Zócalo to campaign one last time. Cárdenas had already finished campaigning in the same place on June 25th.
@24:45: On July 2nd, Porfirio Muñoz Ledo gives a speech in Pátzcuaro, Michoacán warning the people about electoral fraud. Cuauhtémoc Cárdenas is to his right.
@31:30: Murder of Francisco Javier Ovando and Román Gil Heráldez.
@33:47: Fraud being committed in broad daylight by having a lot of "voters" from an unknown location come in and "vote".
@39:24: July 6th, 9pm, both PAN and FDN candidates condemn the fraud that has occurred in the election.
@41:25: Salinas claims (fradulent) victory.
@42:38: On July 7th, Manuel Bartlett, then Secretariat of the Interior, talks about the irregularities in obtaining all of the results from the election.
@44:17: On July 13th, Bags of electoral ballots found in a dumpster. Some of them were burned.
@44:21 That same day, Fernando Elías Calles , Technical Secretary of the Federal Electoral Commission, gives the "official" tally of the votes from the election: Manuel Clothier-3,267,159 (17.07%), Carlos Salinas de Gortari-9,641,329 (50.36%), Cuauhtémoc Cárdenas- 5,956,988 (31.12%)
@44:11: Manuel Bartlett tells his audience to accept the results as the will of the people in a Democracy. This is followed by another politician not believing Bartlett's words.
@49:17: People protesting the electoral fraud. "The People voted and Cárdenas won!"
@50:57: On August 21st, four corpses were found in a car. They were young activists who sympathized(supported?) with Cárdenas.
@54:09: On August 31st, Cárdenas gives a speech in the capital demanding a search for any remaining ballots that have not been accounted for. (So, basically a recount?)
@55:31: On September 1st, President de la Madrid gets called out in front of Congress for the fraud. [Author's note: Knowing that he would later admit that the PRI did commit fraud in 2004 is extremely infuriating. Makes you want to punch or shoot the guy if he were still alive]
@57:31: On September 9th, Congress officially announces that Salinas did win, without investigating all of the ballots (missing or not) . Many Congress members refuse to accept the results.
@58:51: "Here Cárdenas won. Ask the people." More protests supporting Cárdenas occur.
@1:00:31-1:00:44: Translation- This video film was concluded on September 9th, 1988, when the opposition candidates demanded the nullification of the elections. We thank Adriana, Gina, Tonita Pilar, Arturo, Marrós, to the team of Cárdenas (whose title is Civil Engineer) and especially to Rafael Corkidi.
 
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That’s very interesting. I’d love to read a detailed narrative interlude based on that. Makes me wonder if the murder of Latasha Harlins has any influence on TTL’s riot, compared to OTL and if the verdict is never changed by the tone-deaf judge.

I was curious to know about this riot’s existence in your timeline, Roberto El Rey, because I remember reading a comment about how OTL’s riot was a contributing factor to George H.W. Bush losing the 1992 Election due to his poor response to it.
She never dies in TTL, so L.A.'s Asian-American population isn't quite as targeted by the riots.
Oh shit! This is going to have fallout!
This sums up Munoz Ledo's reaction, methinks:
Let chaos reign
Ay caramba
Now that is a twisty situation.

Oh boy shit will be screwed six ways from sunday.
Oh, Dios Mio.

Conspiracy theories are gonna pop out like a flock of doves in the Olympics opening ceremonies. Priistas are gonna cry bloody murder at the top of their lungs while most people will dance in the streets with mariachi bands playing at full blast.
Oh por dios
Oh boy this'll be fun!

This is definitely a sticky situation for PML (although if he handles it well he might be able to avoid the worst of the possible consequences! ;) )

That being said, I would like to make one retcon: Bartlett being able to calm down Mexico's remaining priístas does not make very much sense upon closer examination. By this point, probably a little under 2% of regular Mexicans are still loyal enough to the PRI that they will actively resist Muñoz Ledo's administration unless instructed otherwise by Bartlett—most of the people who voted for Gordillo in the election did so more out of a sense of "the devil I know" than enduring faith in el partido oficial. And even many of those who still like the PRI despise Bartlett personally, seeing him as "not a true priísta" or something to that effect. As for PRI legislators who managed to win seats in this past election, about a dozen are indeed so viscerally loyal to their party that they will go along with whatever their President says. But most of them are self-serving politicians who won in spite of, not because of, their PRI membership, and they see themselves as independent actors not bound by anyone's decree, least of all Manuel Bartlett.

In other words, Bartlett has almost no personal soft power left, even among loyal PRI supporters, and a letter from him wouldn't really do much to mitigate popular opposition to Muñoz Ledo (which is pretty low at this point anyway). So I've retconned that part of the initia update.

Excellent writing as always.
I read this part out-loud and slowly in order to enjoy every detail written.

As much as Bartlett was a bad hombre, he was a product of his time and ideology who genuinely believed he was doing everything for the greater good of Mexico.

His last words hit me a little bit harder than I thought it would.
Holy shit. I almost cried reading that inner monologue by Bartlett. Seriously, that was incredibly sad. Probably the best writing I've encountered on this site so far!
As much of a piece of shit as Bartlett is, I actually felt a moment of pity for him at those last words. Just a moment, but it was there.
The one thing I loved the most about the last chapter is how it showed that Bartlett was still a human being, rather than a mustache-twirling cartoon villain.
It shows how well this is written that in the span of one chapter, I went from hoping Bartlett gets the Mussolini treatment to almost feeling bad for the guy. Great work as always.
With the last bit of writing, I did feel sympathy for Bartlett despite his sheer tyranny, and that does say a lot about the sheer strength of your writing. This is definitely the sort of thing that may cause the violence the TL's title refers to.

I'm so happy to hear all this feedback! When I go back and reread the first few narrative chapters, it really becomes clear to me how I've grown as a writer during the year-and-a-half or so I've been writing this timeline. I'm glad that I've succeeded here in showing Bartlett's human side—one of my worries so far about this timeline has been that I've made him out to be a cartoon villain, when what I had in mind was something more like Richard III.

The next post might take a bit longer, but it'll be a two-in-one—a narrative interlude and a regular chapter!
 
Here is a video made during the election of 1988 that documents the accusations of fraud up until early September 1988.

I thought about translating all of it, but realized that the transcript would not fit in one post and would take too long.

Chronicle of a Fraud (1988)

Highlights:
@2:53-4:47: All presidential candidates during the election; Carlos Salinas de Gortari (PRI), Manuel Clouthier (PAN), and Cuauhtémoc Cárdenas (FDN)
@11:37: On June 3rd, Heberto Castillo, candidate for the Mexican Socialist Party (PMS), declines his candidacy and supports Cárdenas.
@14:30: Cárdenas gives a speech to various audiences around Mexico about how the Revolution's goals should be actualized.
@15:55-24:43: On July 2nd, the PRI and PAN candidates go to the Zócalo to campaign one last time. Cárdenas had already finished campaigning in the same place on June 25th.
@24:45: On July 2nd, Porfirio Muñoz Ledo gives a speech in Pátzcuaro, Michoacán warning the people about electoral fraud. Cuauhtémoc Cárdenas is to his right.
@31:30: Murder of Francisco Javier Ovando and Román Gil Heráldez.
@33:47: Fraud being committed in broad daylight by having a lot of "voters" from an unknown location come in and "vote".
@39:24: July 6th, 9pm, both PAN and FDN candidates condemn the fraud that has occurred in the election.
@41:25: Salinas claims (fradulent) victory.
@42:38: On July 7th, Manuel Bartlett, then Secretariat of the Interior, talks about the irregularities in obtaining all of the results from the election.
@44:17: On July 13th, Bags of electoral ballots found in a dumpster. Some of them were burned.
@44:21 That same day, Fernando Elías Calles , Technical Secretary of the Federal Electoral Commission, gives the "official" tally of the votes from the election: Manuel Clothier-3,267,159 (17.07%), Carlos Salinas de Gortari-9,641,329 (50.36%), Cuauhtémoc Cárdenas- 5,956,988 (31.12%)
@44:11: Manuel Bartlett tells his audience to accept the results as the will of the people in a Democracy. This is followed by another politician not believing Bartlett's words.
@49:17: People protesting the electoral fraud. "The People voted and Cárdenas won!"
@50:57: On August 21st, four corpses were found in a car. They were young activists who sympathized(supported?) with Cárdenas.
@54:09: On August 31st, Cárdenas gives a speech in the capital demanding a search for any remaining ballots that have not been accounted for. (So, basically a recount?)
@55:31: On September 1st, President de la Madrid gets called out in front of Congress for the fraud. [Author's note: Knowing that he would later admit that the PRI did commit fraud in 2004 is extremely infuriating. Makes you want to punch or shoot the guy if he were still alive]
@57:31: On September 9th, Congress officially announces that Salinas did win, without investigating all of the ballots (missing or not) . Many Congress members refuse to accept the results.
@58:51: "Here Cárdenas won. Ask the people." More protests supporting Cárdenas occur.
@1:00:31-1:00:44: Translation- This video film was concluded on September 9th, 1988, when the opposition candidates demanded the nullification of the elections. We thank Adriana, Gina, Tonita Pilar, Arturo, Marrós, to the team of Cárdenas (whose title is Civil Engineer) and especially to Rafael Corkidi.
Thanks for this find and the translations!
 
@Roberto El Rey Is everything alright?
Yes it is, thanks for asking :) a little thing called college classes have been eating up all my spare time and energy for the past couple of months. The next update is actually pretty much done—the problem is that I am planning to precede it with a narrative piece which I haven’t had a chance to start yet. I’ll see how much I can get done in the next couple of weeks, if at all possible I’ll try and push the next two updates out soon! Thank you all for your abiding patience. Rest assured that this timeline is still very much on my mind and that the next update will be coming before too long!
 
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Narrative Interlude #11
22 kilometers outside Cuautla, Morelos
August 23, 1994
3:11 AM

“One, two…three!

The two men grunted with exertion as they yanked the cold, stiff remains of Manuel Bartlett Díaz out of the backseat. Despite their best efforts, the body slipped out of their grasp, tumbled out lifelessly and hit the gravel with a thud.

They stared down at the corpse. A minute went by. Then, without a word, the pilot bent down dutifully, hoisted the former President onto his back, and trudged off into the darkness.

Porfirio Muñoz Ledo slammed the Jeep door and squinted at the night. For a moment, the headlights were just bright enough to make out a small section of the beige-brown airstrip, the dense wall of fir trees surrounding it, and the silhouette of the plainclothed pilot as he marched headlong into those fir trees. Then the lights flicked off and suddenly Porfirio was blind, guided only by the crunch of boots on gravel as he followed the airman to the appointed spot.

After wandering around for a minute in total blindness, Porfirio heard a ka-chunk. Then the darkness was pierced by the tinny glow of a cabin light, by which the President-elect saw his predecessor’s corpse being stuffed into the backseat of a dinged-up Cessna 152. The plane had been concealed inside a little divot carved into the forest; it probably wouldn’t have been hard to spot in broad daylight, but Porfirio was amazed that the pilot had managed to find it in so quickly in the dark (perhaps too quickly, he thought to himself—General Santoyo had insisted this airstrip hadn’t been used for trafficking since the Army had discovered it in February, but Porfirio couldn’t help wondering whether this particular flying ace hadn’t been doing a few “side missions” here and there at his higher-ups’ behest).

Not that any of that mattered now.

"Señor el Presidente,” the pilot called as Porfirio approached the airplane. Porfirio stopped short for a moment. Less than thirty-six hours after his election, he already knew it would be a while before he got used to that title.

"Would you mind clearing away some of the branches while I get the plane ready, señor?” The airman asked with reasonable respect. Muñoz Ledo looked down at the ground in front of the plane, saw a pile of large sticks between it and the runway, wondered if it was possible to look presidential while cleaning up underbrush, then decided he didn’t care and got down on all fours. As he scooped the branches into his hands, he stole a glance through the windscreen and saw his rigor mortis-stricken predecessor being propped up in the backseat and buckled into place. A spidery chill crawled up his spine. Morbid.

After a few more minutes of branch-clearing, Porfirio heard the pilot’s voice again. “Señor el Presidente, would you help me pull the plane out?”

Without a word, he got up, brushed the dirt off his pants, and positioned himself behind the left wing. After five minutes spent writhing around in the dirt, he wasn’t too concerned with protecting his presidential dignity—and besides, he thought to himself, this guy wouldn't be telling too many tales after he accomplished this particular mission.

"Ready,” the pilot shouted, “and…push!

They did. Within seconds, the plane started to budge. The President-elect dug in his heels and pushed even harder. The plane nudged forward, centimeter by centimeter. Finally, after two minutes of primeval grunts and groans, the two men succeeded in pushing it past the treeline and out onto the gravel. Three more minutes and they had gotten it into position, the landing light illuminating half a kilometer of rough, unpaved runway.

The pilot circled around the tail of the plane to face Porfirio. “Forty minutes east-by-south, señor?” He asked in confirmation. “Yes,” said the President-elect, still panting from the exertion.

The airman smiled slightly. "I hope I get some kind of medal after this, sir,” he joked.

"You get this done and keep the secret,” replied Porfirio, trying hard to smile while still gasping for air, “and you’ll be the next Commander of the Air Force.”

The lieutenant chuckled appropriately, then stiffened up and gave a crisp salute, which Porfirio returned. Then the airman lowered his arm, turned around, and clambered into the cockpit. Porfirio, for his part, felt his way back to the Jeep, climbed into the driver’s seat and shut the door.

While the pilot fiddled around with his instruments, Porfirio took stock of the exterior of the craft. It certainly matched his expectations: in the glow of the headlights he saw dings, scuffs, scratch marks, dirt, and flecks of paint missing from the livery. He felt vaguely reassured—this was the spitting image of a trafficker’s plane, a fact which would surely help build the illusion.

Finally, after a few more minutes, the engine gasped, cranked, and sputtered its way to life. The pilot finished his last few checks, flashed one final salute to the President-elect and pushed in the throttle. The aircraft lurched forward. Porfirio caught one last glimpse of his late predecessor in the backseat as the plane sped up, lifted off, cleared the trees at the end of the runway and streaked out into the night, hovering in the sky for a minute before banking left and disappearing behind a distant mountainside.

Porfirio sighed to himself. He reached into the glovebox, pulled out a mobile phone and punched in a number. Two rings later, the voice of General Jesús Gutiérrez Rebollo appeared on the other end. “Are they in the air?”

"Yes, General.”

"Good,” came the response, followed by a click and a dial tone.

Porfirio blinked. He felt pretty certain that no self-respecting President would allow his generals to talk to him that way. For the moment, though, he wasn’t in much of a position to gripe. After all, if Gutiérrez’s flyboys didn’t do their job right tonight, Porfirio would have a hell of a lot of explaining to do tomorrow.

He put the phone back in the glovebox and snapped it closed. He felt around for the key, found it, and put it in the ignition. Then he froze.

The pilot.

What the hell was his name?

He couldn't remember. He couldn't remember the man's name. Porfirio scoured his memory but came up blank. Had the pilot forgotten to introduce himself? No, of course not. That made no sense. Had Porfirio just forgotten it? He'd spent three-and-a-half-hours in the car with this guy but couldn’t even remember his name?

Desperate, he started searching in the dark for any name that seemed remotely familiar. It started with an L, didn’t it? Luis, Lorenzo, Lázaro…no. Well, it had an L somewhere in it, at least, didn't it? Alberto? Uh…Alfonso?

No. Not Alberto. Not Alfonso. Porfirio sighed in resignation. He wasn’t even president yet, and somehow he’d already managed to dispose of a man whose name he couldn't remember.

He looked back at the sky, as if the plane would somehow still be there, hanging in the air, navigation lights flashing in the air like a pair of bashful stars. But all he saw was an endless expanse of bluish-black nothingness, punctuated here and there by a star or two.

Porfirio felt a mix of discomfort and disgust rising within his chest. If this is what it's like to President, he thought to himself, then God only knows why Bartlett wanted the job so damn badly.

With that, he turned the key, put it the Jeep in gear and drove off into the night.
 
What do you mean an Air Force jet took off at the exact same time that plane did, flew toward it, stayed at its side/rear for a moment and then vanished just as the crash occurred?
Obviously he was trying to guide them towards an airport/check out the rear of the aircraft before it's sudden breakup in midair.
 
Oh c'mon the new guy already killed his presuccessor. Can't Mexico ever get it act together and get someone who not corrupt.
 
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