[AH Fiction] Murder in Hitlerstadt

Who should I 'cast' as Ziska?

  • http://www.walagata.com/w/varyar/Jewel_6a.jpg

    Votes: 32 62.7%
  • http://www.walagata.com/w/varyar/Leighton_Meester_1.jpg

    Votes: 19 37.3%

  • Total voters
    51
  • Poll closed .
Thanks for the casting votes, all. Keep 'em coming!

Is there a nazi version of NATO in this TL?

There is indeed - it's called (somewhat anachronistically) the Berlin Pact and consists of Germany, Bulgaria, Croatia, Finland, France, Greece, Hungary, Portugal, Romania, Serbia and Spain. Italy has Albania and Montenegro

For those questioning the date, the map linked on the last story was dated 2017 if memory serves...

Yeah - I haven't pinned the exact dates down for this one, but it's September-October 2017.

Update to come later today.
 
Also Leighton Meester is awesome and I can definitely see her pulling off the role of the cynical police detective in Nazi Germany.
 
I'm sure I don't know what you mean. /cough.

Reader poll time! Choose the (Ziska) Form:

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I vote Number 2.
 
Varyar – will we get a chance to see the current Führer, in 2017? I can't seem to recall you mentioning him in the previous installments.
 
Varyar – will we get a chance to see the current Führer, in 2017? I can't seem to recall you mentioning him in the previous installments.

It's very likely he'll be mentioned more than once and possibly seen on TV or from a great distance. Ziska is no more likely to actually meet him than an NYPD detective is to meet President Trump.

Great story! Will the lovely Therese and her financé (by now) make an appearance maybe?

Sadly, I don't think so :( I'm sure I'll get back to them one of these days, though! (In fact, just this second had an idea for them.)

Flanders and Wallonie have switched places on this map it seems :p.

Er. Uh. The Fuhrer switched their names in a drunken stupor. :eek:

That's most likely my bad when I threw the list of gaue and cities at the mapmaker.

Serbia still has Voijvodina too which is strange as the area was given to Hungary in 1941.

I don't remember what, if anything, was my logic behind that border. The POD of this TL was in 1940, though, so, uh, butterflies? Unlikely butterflies?

Also my bad.
 
OOC: This scene in progress is one I'm not entirely comfortable with - it borrows a little too closely from David Simon's Homicide at points (interrogations of Eugene Dale and David Wilson). I'll try and steer it away from those (admirable) waters in revision.

THREE

The man in Interrogation B was fast asleep when Ziska came in. He woke up with a start when she slammed the door shut behind her.

She sat down at the cheap plastic table, facing the man. Nothing lay between them except a microphone, which Ziska switched on, and a thick folder she set down upon the table.

“Holger Pfitzner, born May 7, 1998, Wittingau, Böhmen. Correct?”

The Bohemian blinked sleepily and then nodded.

“Please speak up for the record.”

“Yes, that’s me,” Pfitzner said. “Holger Pfitzner.” He had a Bohemian accent, to be sure.

“You live at 25 Auerswaldstraße and work for Rohrmeister GmbH. Yes?”

“Yes.”

Ziska opened up the file on the table in front of her and began to read. “Arrested twice. June 17, 2008, Prag. Section 244 of the Reich Criminal Code.” Whosoever commits a theft for the commission of which he breaks into or enters a dwelling or intrudes by using a false key or other tool not typically used for gaining access or hides in the dwelling shall be liable to imprisonment from six months to ten years. “Sentenced to nine months construction work on Autobahn 205, section Pilsen to Prag.”

Pfitzner nodded. “I was young and stupid.”

“Clearly. February 23, 2012, Prag. Section 224 of the Reich Criminal Code.” Whosoever causes bodily harm by acting jointly with another shall be liable to imprisonment from six months to ten years, in less serious cases to imprisonment from three months to five years. “Sentenced to three years in Ruzen Prison. And now, here you are in Hitlerstadt. There are other charges, but they’re incidental. This is the one that matters. Section 211 of the Reich Criminal Code. Whosoever commits murder under the conditions of this provision shall be liable to imprisonment for life or the death penalty.” She paused three seconds to let that sink in. “The death penalty, Mr. Pfitzner. Do you understand?”

“I didn’t –”

She coldly cut him off. “Have you ever seen the guillotine at Plötzensee, Mr. Pfitzner?” Ziska gave him no time to answer. “I have.”

Pfitzner shook his head. “I didn’t kill anybody. You arrested the wrong man.”

“Of course we did. And the right man left his gun in your car.”

“No –”

“Then how did the gun get there? Right now, my colleagues in the technical section are testing that gun. Right now, they’re finding out that the gun in your car is the same one that killed Jürgen Meissner. Right now – ”

“Who?”

“Jürgen Meissner. The man you shot.”

“I don’t know him. I didn’t shoot him.”

“Right now, they’re checking the bullets in your gun –”

“It’s not –”

“– against the bullets that killed Jürgen Meissner. When they’re done, they’ll tell me, I’ll tell my lieutenant, and he’ll tell the district attorney. Do you know what will happen next?”

Pfitzner stared and shook his head.

“A trial – a short one, of course – and a stay in Plötzensee – a short one, of course – and...” Ziska drew two fingers across her neck.

“I didn’t kill him. I don’t know him. It’s not my gun.”

“Yes you did, yes you did, and yes it is.”

“It’s not.”

“Then why was it in your car?”

“Someone put it there.”

“Someone shot Meissner and put the gun in your car.”

“Yes!”

“Why?”

“I don’t know! Ask him!”

“Do you know who did it?”

“No.”

“That’s a shame.”

“You have to believe me! I did stupid things, yes, but I’m not a murderer.”

“Really.”

“Really!”

Ziska flipped over some sheets in the folder. She pulled out a large black and white photograph. It was a little grainy, but it clearly showed Pfitzner being shoved up against the side of a car by a pair of Orpos. It was also, thanks to a street sign at the edge of the photo, clearly taken on Schröderdamm in Hakenkreuzberg.

“That’s you.”

“Yes.”

“That’s your car.”

“Yes.”

“This was taken on Schröderdamm.”

Hesitation, then a nod.

“Jürgen Meissner lived on Waldemarstraße.”

Pfitzner shrugged.

“Only two blocks from where you were arrested.”

“So?”

“You live in Weißensee. That’s seven kilometers from Schröderdamm. You work in Wilmersdorf. That’s nine kilometers from Schröderdamm. What were you doing on Schröderdamm?”

Pfitzner stared at her for a second or two. “Visiting a friend,” he finally said.

“A friend?”

“Yes.”

“What’s your friend’s name? Where does he live?”

“On Felsendamm.”

“And what’s the name of your friend that lives on Felsendamm?”

“I – Fritz.”

“Fritz.”

“Yes.”

“And what’s Fritz’s family name?”

“I don’t know.”

“You don’t know your friend’s last name?”

“I only met him twice. At a bar.”

Ziska put her fingers together, wrists resting on the table. She stared at Pfitzner for a moment. “Are you a homosexual, Mr. Pfitzner?”

“No!”

“Are you sure?”

“Thor and Christ, yes! I didn’t – I haven’t done anything –”

“Okay,” Ziska said after a few seconds. “I like to be fair. Tell me your story. Tell me your side. Tell me what happened that night.”

Pfitzner rubbed his hands together, his handcuffs clinking noisily as he did. “Okay. Okay.”

“Any time now,” Ziska prompted after a few more seconds.

“Okay,” Pfitzner said again. “This is what happened...”
 
Thor and Christ? I'd like to hear the story behind that.

Not much of one. Just an emphatic phrase used by someone who doesn't particularly believe in either. I don't want to cross the streams of the SS-cult and actual Norse beliefs too much, but these sorts of things will come up now and then.

As for the list of Fuhrers, I don't think I ever named the current one (please correct me if I'm wrong, though!), so let's go with this list:

Adolf Hitler (1933-1965)
Heinrich Himmler (1965-1969)
Reinhard Heydrich (1969-1986)
Gustav Lerner (1986-2007)
Otto Hierländer (2007-)
 
Sorry for nitpicking, but didn't Hitler pass away in 1964? I think you mentioned in From the Atlantic to the Urals that Germania was renamed Hitlerstadt after his death in '64.

No need to apologize! I welcome corrections. I think it was renamed on his 75th birthday, but if I said otherwise in that thread, I'll correct it here.
 
So, why is Ashkabad marked as the Soviet capital in-map while you stated that Vladivostok was the Soviet capital? Was that a typo? And speaking of Turkmenistan, what became of Turkmenbashi (or Saparmurat Niyazov) ITTL as he was born in February 1940 (assuming he wasn't butterflied away)?
 
So, why is Ashkabad marked as the Soviet capital in-map while you stated that Vladivostok was the Soviet capital? Was that a typo?

Chuckleheadedness on my part. I either forgot to tell the mapmaker or decided Vladivostok was the capital after the map was made, can't remember.

And speaking of Turkmenistan, what became of Turkmenbashi (or Saparmurat Niyazov) ITTL as he was born in February 1940 (assuming he wasn't butterflied away)?

Died in the earthquake in 1948.
 
Update coming later today, but for now, I got bored and added a proper poll to the thread. Vote early, vote often!
 
The idea of Jewel as a Aryan Nazi policewoman is certainly out of the box casting! Technically isn't Ziska an officer of the SS? Also how does the Nazi regime deal with career women like Ziska who are unmarried and more importantly not bearing children? Are they "highly encouraged" to visit a lebensborn center? At least donate their eggs to the fatherland? Maybe it is noted in Meester's record that she hasn't had any children and this affects promotions?
 
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