Thank you for providing some
constructive criticism.
Earling said:
Well erm.. you need more description about what this Social-Monarchism is... I tend to read it as where large social groups, probably of the working class get behind the Monarch. This makes some vague sence in the description of Germany you mention, but how can a Social-Monarchist go to be Neo-Colonial?
You're right; if I planned to develop this idea at some point (and Xen didn't mind), I'd definitely go into more detail.
Earling said:
The vast majority of Colonial positions are not held by any people of the working classes who are presumerably so important to this Social-Monarchist movement. Empire has largely been the preserve of rich people with the money to invest after all.
My thought was that the 'social-monarchist philosophy' - whatever it actually happens to be - undergoes a schism rather like communism and 'true' socialism developing along separate paths. The French version would be set up to use the assets and talents of the people, based on merit, not social standing, to carry out the King's wishes. The German version, on the other hand, would say that the nobility exists to further the common good of the people. I dunno; just random thoughts.
Earling said:
Otherwise it starts well.. then seems to drift a bit towards the end. Japan invades the Philipines (which are presumerably independant by 1956 if the US took them in the first place), so the US promptly launches a total war which culminates with a massive invasion of the mainland.. Er.. how on earth is that going to get sold to the people. I highly doubt India would get involved since they have no real benefit in getting involved and are probably quite isolationist.
Yup, it's kind of brief at the end. I realized I was starting to write a full-on TL instead of just giving Xen an idea on possible ways he might go, and decided I'd better leave well enough alone. Again, I probably actually wouldn't have had the US and Japan go to war, especially since Xen describes the US as being even more isolationist than OTL, but I'm just trying to stick to his outline.
Earling said:
Theres also a question how Russia is both incredibly weak but manages to fight on for 4 years, presumerably with a pitiful industry and thus army which is almost completely incapable of offensive military operations. How it manages to supply the vast amount of revenue required for a successful Indian Mutiny is also.. in question. (Whether India be more demanding of freedom or less so in this TL is debatable I suppose...)
I thought I had made it clear that the Czar had been building up his industrial base for several years before-hand. You're right though; they probably would've caved in less than four years. The only reason I had them holding out that long was due to the sheer geographical distances involved. The Russians could afford to retreat and retreat, bleeding the Brits and Germans dry.
As for the Mutiny, I was less than clear. It did NOT succeed, but it scared the British so badly that they eventually granted India its freedom, while ensuring that the government was friendly towards them, so that they could retain their trading rights and perhaps some port cities.
Earling said:
I also reckon an invasion from Alaska to Siberia is doomed to failure.. but otherwise its largely fine beyond a few questions about those later wars
I think a trans-Bering invasion would be incredibly difficult, but not impossible. Again, I didn't go into much detail, but the US I envisaged in this TL doesn't have a very strong navy; instead, they have powerful land forces, honed from fighting a series of wars in central america.
I also didn't go into any nuclear programs, once again because Xen didn't really specify if there were any.