A Knee In The Wrong Place: Franz Ferdinand Lives and Reigns

Since Hobelhouse has decided to put "Franz Ferdinand Had A Much Better Day" on ice, and as MrP has also put "Pour le Coeur" on hiatus, I guess I may as well try my own hand at a "Franz Ferdinand lives" TL. I'm going to need a good deal of help as things go along; I may try "plausibility checks" similar to what acgoldis is doing on his "Hogwarts Exposed Timeline" in the ASB section. So, here goes...

JUNE 28, 1914
SUNDAY MORNING
THE INTERSECTION OF FRANZ-JOSEF STREET AND APPEL QUAY
SARAJEVO, BOSNIA-HERZEGOVINA, AUSTRO-HUNGARIAN EMPIRE

Gavrilo Princip could hardly believe his luck. He'd been standing disconsolately outside a tavern next to a big cardboard cutout of a liqueur bottle when the motorcade carrying the Thronfolger, Archduke Franz Ferdinand, rattled by. One of his confederates, Nedjelko Cabrinovic, had thrown a bomb at the Archduke's car, but as far as Princip could tell, it had had no result, and the rest of his wretched "Young Bosnia" associates had literally done nothing. He had been glumly wondering if he should just step inside the bar and get drunk while trying to figure out how to avoid the police...

To his delight, the big motorcar carrying the Archduke, the military governor of the province, and several others, suddenly turned onto Franz-Josef Street, following the car carrying the mayor of Sarajevo. The governor - General Oskar Potoriek, the conspiracy's #2 target - was yelling something at the chauffeur about going the wrong way. The fellow stopped the car right in front of Princip, who saw his golden opportunity and grabbed for his Belgian-made Browning automatic.

As he looked for a clear field of fire, the would-be assassin found himself looking straight into the puzzled dark eyes of Sophie, the Duchess of Hohenberg, Franz Ferdinand's wife. Princip, rattled by the unexpected sight, hesitated for a moment, warring with his residual chivalric inclinations...and you know what they say about those who hesitate.

As Princip steadied himself and took aim, a plainclothes detective who had been standing a few feet behind him grabbed the young man. The detective, in turn, was kneed in the groin by another "Young Bosnia" supporter (not in on Princip's group, incidentally). The policeman grunted in pain and fell heavily against Gavrilo Princip just as, with his face averted, he fired his pistol.

Two shots cracked.

Silence for a brief instant, and then a cacophony of shouts and screams. General Potoriek doubled over in agony, clutching at his left side, and the chauffeur (one Leopold Loyka) yelled as well, grabbing at his right arm. Sophie barely had time to gasp before Franz Ferdinand grabbed her, covering her with his own body and shouting to his suite in the motorcars just behind his for help. Count Harrach, who as it happened owned the car and who had been standing on the running board next to the Archduke to provide some bodily shielding, clambered back into the car and gently eased the wounded Loyka aside, as Franz Ferdinand's chamberlain, Baron Morsey, and several others clustered around General Potoriek. Harrach looked back at the Archduke. "We're getting out of here, Your Highness!" he shouted, working the vehicle's gears frantically.

"Good, good - get us back to the Konak, right now! We have wounded!" barked Franz Ferdinand, still cradling his frightened wife protectively. He looked down at the Duchess and spared a brief tender moment. "Are you all right, Sopherl?" he asked softly. Sophie nodded, a bit shakily. "I feel faint but I'll be all right, Franzi. What in heaven's name happened?" The Archduke shook his head grimly. "More fanatics. I knew I should have followed my first idea and wrapped up the tour last night." He snorted a brief burst of sardonic laughter. "At this rate, we really are going to end up with a bomb on the Viribus Unitis on the way home!"

Harrach got the car into gear after what seemed an eternity but was really only a few seconds, and the motorcade rattled hurriedly across the Latein Bridge, making for the Konak with its precious - and living - cargo. Behind it, chaos reigned at the intersection as police, soldiers and civilians milled around, some of them trying to beat Princip up while others tried to arrest him and yet others tried to restore order among the frightened spectators...
 
As I had been watching Hobelhouse's work (and sad that it's been put on ice) I'll be keeping a good eye on this...subscribed my friend. :)
 
Thanks! The first post is based on Gordon Brook-Shepherd's account of the assassination in his book Archduke of Sarajevo. OTL, a detective really did grab Princip and got kneed by another "Young Bosnia" radical. The POD is that the knee in the groin works a little too well; the detective, reacting, pushes hard enough against Princip that he's thrown off balance as he shoots and the bullets go wild, hitting Potoriek and Loyka.

The scene is going to shift northward next, to the reactions of various folks in Vienna, its suburbs and Bohemia...
 
ARCHDUKE KARL'S SUMMER RESIDENCE
REICHENAU, 30 MILES SW OF VENICE

Archduke Karl looked up, puzzled. There had been an unaccountable pause in the serving of luncheon where he and his family sat in their little garden house on the estate, enjoying the gorgeous early-summer day. As he was about to say something, one of the servants, with an unaccustomedly grave look on his face, came in, carrying a telegram. He silently handed it to the Archduke.

Karl glanced at the flimsy yellow sheet and his eyebrow shot up. "Rumerskirch?" he remarked. "That's odd. Why him? He's with Uncle Franz down in Bosnia. Well, let's see what he has to say..." He read the brief message aloud: "His Imperial Highness and the Duchess accosted by assassins here in Sarajevo today. Through Divine Providence, they are unharmed, but General Potoriek seriously wounded, outcome uncertain."

Archduchess Zita, Karl's wife, gasped in dismay. "Oh no! Uncle Franz and Aunt Sophie? Are they all right? Really? The children! What will they think?"

Karl shook his head. "You know as much as I do, darling. Potoriek wounded...The possible culprits I can think of off the top of my head are Serbian radicals. Good God! Their plot may have misfired - at least for now - but what'll happen next?" He looked at his wife. "I think I'd better get back to Vienna as soon as we've finished our luncheon."

CHULMETZ, BOHEMIA

Doctor Stanowsky, the Jesuit engaged by the Archduke and Duchess as tutor of their three children (Sophie, 13; Max, 12 and Ernst, 10) glanced up as a servant came into the dining room where he was having lunch with his pupils. "Father, please excuse me, but you're wanted on the telephone," he said. Stanowsky smiled at the young people. "Will you excuse me? I'll be right back."

It wasn't quite as quick as "right back", and in a few minutes, the priest-academic returned, looking disturbed. Sophie glanced up, and seeing Stanowsky's face, got a concerned look on her own face. "Bad news, Father?" she inquired. "Well, in a way, dear. That was a call from Vienna."

"Our parents?" Max asked, worried.

"Your Papi and Mami are fine," Stanowsky reassured the children, bringing smiles to their faces. "In fact, they're going to be coming home soon. But it's....rather complicated. Your Aunt Henriette will be coming up from Prague later today, and she'll be staying with us until your parents get home."

With that, the children returned to their meal, wondering, if their parents were all right, what could have caused their teacher to look so appalled...

BAD ISCHL
OUTSIDE VIENNA

"Your Majesty?"

Franz Josef I glanced up from the paperwork on his desk at the voice of his longtime adjutant, Count Paar.

"Yes, Paar, what is it?" He paused and peered more closely at the other man's face. "What's gone amiss?"

"Sire, there has been an attempt on the life of the Thronfolger in Sarajevo," replied the Count bluntly. The Emperor went still for a moment, then laid down his pen carefully and stood up, leaning slightly on the desk.

"Dear God..." he breathed. He closed his eyes for a moment. "Is the Archduke all right?"

"Yes, praise be to God and the Virgin, and the Duchess too," replied Count Paar. The Emperor sighed with relief, then shook his head. "Amen. I do not know that I could have borne another tragedy, after so many...Was anyone else hurt, then?"

"Yes, Your Majesty. Your governor of the province, General Potoriek, was shot in the chest. He is being attended to by the surgeons, but..." Paar shrugged. "His condition is very serious, and the doctors will not give a definite prognosis at this point. The chauffeur was also wounded, though less seriously."

"Terrible! Terrible!" the Emperor answered, shaking his head. "We must certainly pray for both of them to recover. Is there any news on who was responsible for this outrage?"

"As a matter of fact, Sire, several men have already been taken into custody. Interrogation is just getting underway, but the authorities in Sarajevo have already determined that they are young, radical Bosnian Serbs, sympathetic to the Serbian government."

Franz Josef frowned heavily at that. "Not good. Not good at all. If Belgrade truly is involved in this outrage, there will be the Devil to pay...Well, Paar, keep me informed. If and when new dispatches come in from Sarajevo, let me know. I particularly wish to be kept updated on the condition of poor General Potoriek."

"Yes, Your Majesty," Paar answered, bowing. At the Emperor's nod, he bowed again and withdrew. Franz Josef took a deep breath, then composed himself, sat back down and returned to his paperwork.
 
COLONEL DRAGUTIN DIMITRIJEVIC'S RESIDENCE
BELGRADE, SERBIA

Ring. Ring.

"Hello? Dimitrijevic speaking."

"Colonel, this is Tankosic. I have a report on the transaction at Sarajevo."

"Ah, good. Were the horses well sold?"

A pause. "I regret to report not, Colonel. Both have yet to find a buyer, and are returning to their barn."

"Dammit! (indistinct muttering in Serbo-Croatian) I was afraid this would happen. Those young fellows had real Serbian spirit, but I couldn't say as much for their expertise. Did they at least use their cyanide?"

"I'm afraid not, sir. Our agent reports that most of them just stood there like wooden posts." Dimitrijevic swore again, more vilely. Tankosic continued, "Cabrinovic did throw his bomb, but the Archduke had the devil's own luck and tossed it back out again. It was Princip who took the final shots, but he got involved in a melee and his bullets missed."

Dimitrijevic groaned. "Young IDIOTS!!!"

"It's not a complete fiasco though, Colonel. Our man in Sarajevo reports that Potoriek was badly wounded. He's in surgery but it's still uncertain whether he'll pull through."

The burly Dimitrijevic - whose nickname was "Apis" - grunted with considerably less than perfect satisfaction. "I wanted that thick-lipped Austrian fool of an Archduke. A general makes a rather inferior consolation prize. However, we will just have to go on." His voice sharpened. "Is there any indication that the government knows anything?"

"No, sir," Tankosic replied with assurance. "As far as I know, you're the first in Belgrade to know."

"That's something, all right," Apis growled. "Those old women in the ministries would piss their lace panties if they were faced with the necessity of doing the things we must do to reunite all Serbs under one flag and one crown. Keep me posted, Major. I'd better get to work covering our tracks - if those young idiots didn't kill themselves, they're liable to lay a trail straight back to us. We may still be able to make something out of this, though."

"Yes, sir," Tankosic replied. Apis hung up and began pacing his study, thinking hard...

NOTE: The names Dimitrijevic and Tankosic should have accent marks, apologies.
 
Ah, so you've written about my favorite Habsburgs from the 20th century, and then I see the Serbian plot gets even deeper...
 
Ah, so you've written about my favorite Habsburgs from the 20th century, and then I see the Serbian plot gets even deeper...

Remember that Apis and his Black Hand organization are running their skulduggery independently of the Serbian government, which will deposit a couple of large bricks in the commode if and when it finds out what the Colonel has been up to.

PLAUSIBILITY CHECK #1: I'm thinking he could keep the pot stirring in Bosnia by fomenting riots among the Serbian population; OTL, following the assassination Croats and Muslims rioted against local Serbs (there are pictures of streets full of broken furniture and wooden fixtures), but in the changed circumstances, and with the Serb celebration of St. Vitus' Day ongoing, possibly Apis could have his local agents stir up Bosnian Serbs to fight back against the Croats and Muslims. With General Potoriek still down for the count (whether he gets back up again, you'll have to wait and see :D ) there's a temporary vacuum at the top of the local A-H command which would slow them down in their reaction to unrest (plus which Vienna is still only just now beginning to react to the news). Anyone who has expertise on Apis and his gang, please advise!
 
Yeah, IIRC the involvement of the Serbian government in the plot is something that would be better off in a Political Chat thread instead of here.

But if Potoriek does die of his wounds then I'd assume that Austria-Hungary won't be happy, though obviously less belligerent than in OTL.
 
PLAUSIBILITY CHECK #2: Dissension in Vienna! I'm thinking the two camps could coalesce around Franz Ferdinand and the Foreign Minister, Count Berchtold, who OTL argued for a measured policy toward Serbia after the assassination and was associated both OTL and TTL with FF's relatively more pacifistic stance (don't worry, I won't have the Archduke singing "Kumbaya" with anyone anytime soon :D), and the hardliners grouping around the Chief of Staff, Conrad von Hotzendorf, FF's erstwhile protege (they weren't so close as they used to be - among other things, there'd been an unpleasant incident at a big dinner celebrating the centennial of the Battle of Nations the previous year where the Archduke chewed out Conrad in front of the Kaiser and a roomful of high-ranking German and A-H officers; he very nearly resigned over the humilation, and it must still be rankling.) So, we'd have some fun shouting matches in the A-H cabinet chambers, and it'd be an opportunity for FF to go into one of his notorious rages (likely without Sophie around to calm him down; she had a positively magical effect on the man in that regard). Maybe even a final breach between FF and Conrad, with Conrad quitting in high dudgeon...but then, who's next in line to be A-H Chief of Staff? I need to check on that.
 
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Yeah, IIRC the involvement of the Serbian government in the plot is something that would be better off in a Political Chat thread instead of here.

But if Potoriek does die of his wounds then I'd assume that Austria-Hungary won't be happy, though obviously less belligerent than in OTL.

True on both counts, and everyone, let's not get sidetracked into a debate on whether or to what extent Belgrade was involved; I'm going with the "Apis as loose cannon" theory here, given that he already had compassed the murder of his previous sovereign and his queen in 1905. In fact, there might well be some people in the Serbian government who wouldn't be exactly unhappy to throw the Colonel under the omnibus if it would avert a war. The thing is, he's aware of that too.
 
THE KONAK
SARAJEVO, BOSNIA-HERZEGOVINA
LATE AFTERNOON/EARLY EVENING, 28 JUNE 1914

"Well?" Franz Ferdinand asked the exhausted-looking army doctor.

"Your Imperial Highness, we've managed to stabilize General Potoriek's condition. The bullet entered his left lung but didn't strike his heart or any of the major blood vessels, and lodged against one of his ribs. He's still in very serious condition, but barring infection or other complications, we believe he will recover. He will be laid up for a considerable time to come, however."

The Archduke nodded. "Very well. What of the chauffeur - Loyka, I think the fellow's name is?"

"A simple procedure by comparison, Your Highness. We only needed to remove the bullet from his biceps."

"Good." Franz Ferdinand turned to his chamberlain. "Morsey, when can we get out of here?"

"Her Highness, along with Countess Lanjus (the Duchess' lady-in-waiting) is supervising the packing at the hotel in Bad Ilidze now, Highness. We should be ready to move later tonight," the Baron replied.

"All right. I want to get back to Vienna as soon as possible. I don't trust those idiots - they may go off half-cocked. Particularly Conrad - he's turned into too much of a hothead the last few years for my peace of mind," the Archduke growled. "Remind me to get the initial interrogation reports from the local police before we leave. It's hard for me to think this was an official plot by the Serbian government - nobody would be THAT lunatic - but we need to make sure before we decide our response. In fact..." He thought a moment. "Morsey, take a telegram and send it to His Majesty. It's time I reported directly on today's events to him."

BAD ISCHL

Count Paar approached the Emperor at his supper table. "Your Majesty, forgive the interruption. I have here a telegram from the Thronfolger."

"Ah, good!" Franz Josef answered, wiping his mouth. "I've been expecting to hear from him. Let me have it, please." He accepted the yellow sheet and read through it carefully. Allowing for the constraints of telegraphic communication, the message's import was clear: General Potoriek had survived, at least for now, but was still in a bad way. Franz Ferdinand was uncertain about the origin of the attempt but did not think it to have been authorized by the Serbian government, and earnestly urged His Majesty to restrain the Imperial and Royal Government from making any precipitate moves until (a) he had returned to Vienna and (b) more information was available from the interrogations of the captured assassins. The Emperor harrumphed. "That at least, I think I can promise my nephew. Our government is, I am forced to admit, not especially noted for efficient responses to crises. Is there anything else, Paar?"

"Yes, Your Majesty, Count Berchtold (the Austro-Hungarian Foreign Minister) called. He wants instructions, and so does General Conrad."

"Very well. Berchtold is to contact our allies in Berlin and Rome and bring them up to date. We know Our cousin the Kaiser will be urgently interested he and Our nephew are close friends. Berchtold should refrain from making any public statements implicating Serbia, at least until Our government can sort out their role, if any. Conrad will increase the alert levels of the units immediately facing Serbia, but We see no reason at this point to go to the extreme of mobilization."

"Yes, Your Majesty." Paar bowed and withdrew.

(Author's note: At this point, what happens next depends in part on how much the police in Sarajevo can get from Princip and Cabrinovic, plus whatever other members of the group they managed to snap up. OTL, Princip kept his mouth shut about the extent of the Black Hand's involvement, but this might not necessarily be so ITTL. Opinions?)
 
Accent marks?:confused:
The final "c"'s in the Serbian names Dimitrijevic and Tankosic have accent marks in Brook-Shepherd's book, where I've been drawing much of my OTL information from so far. If that's not correct, let me know.
 

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Remember that Apis and his Black Hand organization are running their skulduggery independently of the Serbian government, which will deposit a couple of large bricks in the commode if and when it finds out what the Colonel has been up to.

PLAUSIBILITY CHECK #1: I'm thinking he could keep the pot stirring in Bosnia by fomenting riots among the Serbian population; OTL, following the assassination Croats and Muslims rioted against local Serbs (there are pictures of streets full of broken furniture and wooden fixtures), but in the changed circumstances, and with the Serb celebration of St. Vitus' Day ongoing, possibly Apis could have his local agents stir up Bosnian Serbs to fight back against the Croats and Muslims. With General Potoriek still down for the count (whether he gets back up again, you'll have to wait and see :D ) there's a temporary vacuum at the top of the local A-H command which would slow them down in their reaction to unrest (plus which Vienna is still only just now beginning to react to the news). Anyone who has expertise on Apis and his gang, please advise!

I don't think that any major fight-back from Bosnian Serbs can be expected. There's a reason why they didn't fight back OTL.

Also, IIRC, Potiorek had a civil deputy, that could take over control if Potiorek is dead/incapacitated.
;)
 
That's not accent mark.
That's a letter in South-Slavic alphabets Ć. ( roughly pronounced in English as CH )

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ć

Native English speakers tend to consider "standard Latin letters with accent marks" to be accented letters, even if the combination is considered a distinct letter in its native language (for example, Å in Scandinavian languages).

Anyway, I'm very excited to see where this TL goes. I haven't a real opinion on how much the captured assassins should talk, though; I don't know nearly enough about the situation at the time.
 
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