What happened with the Ottomans and Armenians? There was an admission of guilt?
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Well, a sort of 'we recognise that some misguided army officers went over the top. We're sorry that happened, but are in no way really responsible.'
Sorry for the lack of updates, I've been away over Christmas.
Also, I'm not very far ahead in writing, so expect intermittent delays in future.
Thanks. Now correctedOK, that's fine.
With the new update, consider editing "Down the street marched a brigade of soldiers in grey uniforms marched down the street."
You repeat 'marched' twice, which doesn't sound good.
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I'm reading your story with great interest Alex; well written. The only nit I'd pick thus far is that I would of had Karl style himself King of Austria rather then lower his status to that of Archduke.
To all.
Due to the unfortunate coincidence of Real Life and Writer's Block, I'm postponing updates on this thread for the foreable future. Hopefully I'll have enough material to continue later this year.