ninebucks
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I dunno about the "U.S.S. Great Link" as a name, or the Remans being an augment army...(Although I always favored them being Romulans who were just violently oppressed as opposed to the monster appearance we see in Nemesis...ruddy lack-of-imagination idiots...)
Other than that...this definitely sounds like it'd make a much better movie.
I liked that the Remans were a different species, (a species with V-shaped cranial ridges, for that matter, explaining where the Romulans got them from), but it was a bit strange that they were made to look so monstrous - I mean, surely we were supposed to feel some sympathy for them? They were fighting for their freedom from slavery after all.