By this point in OTL, Finland, Ukraine, and most importantly Lithuania had declared independence. Did the same take place here?
We will get to Finland in a while, but yes they have declared independence at this point. Ukrainian independence was declared in November 1917 as IOTL and is discussed in update four. I hadn't thought much of Lithuania tbh, but from my quick read of the situation they are allowed to declare independence by the Germans.
This is probably the first time an alternate history timeline made me feel something. Frankly, I think of Trotsky as a weasel, and this TL has made it even worse. Be aware of course, I have monarchist views, so I'm a pretty bad choice for a TL like this.
I think that is a compliment. I am taking it as a compliment, so thank you
. But seriously, I can't imagine a better result than actually moving someone with my writing.
Trotsky is an interesting figure, much as many of the other leading communists in Russia were. They were all shaped by this deep-seated sense that anything could be done in the name of the revolution. Trotsky is an easy man to dislike, but from a storytelling perspective he is an absolutely fantastic character to move around for that precise reason.
The Romanovs will have their place in the story, and there are plenty of monarchies out there at this point in time, so while Russia might not turn out monarchist (then again, the pieces are there for them to rebuild) there are plenty of other places to get your monarchist kicks.
Heh, I don't think that Russia is staying leftist in this one
Why do you think so?
I mean, sure the RSDLP, Constituent Assembly and Russian Republic are in deep shit, but there are plenty of other left-wing factions around. The Left SRs have extensive support in the countryside while the Bolsheviks in Moscow are completely in the clear - expanding their power ever further.
Interesting. The separation of the princesses seems logical - with 4 of them I would naturally presume that they'd have a plan B anyway where the Tsar, Tsarina, and crown prince separate and then the oldest and youngest and the two middle sisters try to escape, with that pairing being split up if need be, and that is what you have, even if it is more spur of the moment than planned. I wonder how far into Siberia Olga and Anatasia are - that is a huge area.
The use of radio has some interesting side effects. I don't know if they would have had reporters and the like, but it may be seen as a medium slightly more used for dramas than just plain news reporting. I don't know if this will have a huge effect, but whereas OTL there were false reports that the reporter covering the Hindenberg disaster was roundly criticized or even fired for his very emotional reporting, tht cry of "Oh, the humanity" and other high emoting might be seen as just normal for radio TTL.
With the 1918 Spring Offensive possibly blunted, that will have some very interesting results. Will Hoffman be sacked quickly if he can't produce results? Germany may figure with Romania and Italy out of the war they *should* have it easy - although he might get a break in that the Germans rebounded against the Russian offensive well. (After all, they don't have OTL as a guide so they probably figure, "Okay, Russia gave us all they had and with General Witner fighting for them as it did against Napoleon, and we didn't wither away, so it's not too bad." Plus, Wilhelm II might not have been the type to fire people that quickly, anyway.)
The events leading up to the struggle for control of the Romanovs are based largely on OTL and proceed in much the same way as OTL events. Keeping Olga and Anastasia around will allow me to work them into the story in a variety of ways as we move forward. The Romanov sisters are currently staying at the Sakharnoye Cloister (real location, but no OTL cloister to my knowledge) in the Krasnoyarsk Krai. It is north-west of Krasnoyarsk around 270 kilometers from the city. I hope that helps, should be able to find it with google maps.
You might have a point about radio developing differently in how it is used, but I think the main consequence will be an earlier appreciation of the possibilities for mass media - specifically the radio. Seeing how captivated the Russian population (and the world population once they get their hands on it) are with the events depicted, the medium will see more extensive use earlier on by a variety of figures.
The first half of 1918 on the western front will be the focus of several updates as we move forward so I won't make too much comment on what is going to happen there. That said, IMO it would be difficult for Hoffmann to do a worse job than Ludendorff in 1918. Quite honestly, Ludendorff's conduct during 1918 is absolutely abysmal - being characterized by countless miscalculations, wrongheaded orders and a mental collapse which turned into a disaster for Germany. Additionally, Hoffmann is quite possibly the most capable and intelligent military leader of the entire war, and was integral to all of Hindenburg and Ludendorff's successes in the East. The failures of the first couple of weeks of the Parsky Offensive land quite squarely on Ludendorff's shoulders, while the recovery is attributed to Hoffmann (with pretty damn good reason). Hoffmann is widely considered to have done a masterful job in the east while keeping his focus on the West. The German people are fully aware that while they seem to be on a winning streak, they are facing the greatest challenge yet in the west.