A Braver Alexander Severus ( I need to get a more catchy name for the TL)

My new ideia of Pod is based around the Roman invasion of Sassanid Persia as a succesful ending, with the emperor leding the important attack that he historically didn't

If someone is willing to read and comment please do it

the TL will be written in a History Book kind of way and if someone can help me with maps I would be glad
 
what fifty viewers and no coments I'mstarting to think that I won't write this

By the way does anyone know where can i get a Ah book in my country and in my language
 
Someone else said it best but I'll paraphrase them here: Just because you get no comments doesn't mean people aren't interested, it means they're curious but reserving judgement until you produce something they can comment on. I think it sounds interesting if you're hunting for a comment.
 
more catchy name for the TL - suggestions

Nomen Omen [the name is a sign of the future] Since we have another Alexander conquering Persia

Memento Carrhae [remember of Carrhae]

Megalos Alexandros Augustus [Alexander the great -the same title of the other A- Augustus]

Eagles over Cthesiphon

Parthian Shot in case you want the invasion ultimately to fail

The Eagle over the Winged Sun the second being one of the main Zoroastrian symbols
 
Thank you mailinutile2

and I will start writing as soon as I make some research

Till then Nomen Omen
 
Nomen Omen ( need some things read inside)

First Years of Alexander Severus

After several year of caos the Roman Empire finally had a competent Emperor in charge. But in the beggining Severus didn't rule alone. He had a great collection of advisors, chief among them Cassius Dio, personal friend of the Emperor and author of a great history of the reign of Alexander. Other influencial advisor was Ulpian who would ultimatelly die at the hands the praetorian guard during the several small revolts in the beggining of the new emperor reign.
Despite the several revolts in the army, the people generally liked Severus and the only group who didn't liked him was the soldiers he had reduced the salaries.
But great feats awaited Severus.


Sassanid raids and Severus counter-offensive

After the fall of the Pathian Empire, the new Sassanid Emperor Artaxerxes aspired to conquer all the Roman East and started raiding the roman territory on the west side of the euphrates. Severus didn't attack imediatelly and instead send diplomats explaining Artaxerxes that he was attacking roman territory and thus risking war. The diplomat also explained that the Emperor would forget all this if the sassanid returned back to the east side of the Euphrates because Artaxerxes was a new emperor and perhaps didn't know that he couldn't raid roman territory.
Artaxerxes replied that he knew what he was doing and that he wanted to conquer the east.
Alexander then set to attack the Sassanids with a three front attack. One would attack through Armenia and would attack from the north, another front would attack from the south and the third and largest front led by the emperor would attack from the center.
Alexander set with some Rhine legions from Rome and reached the Euphrate in the summer of 231 and the planned attack started imediatelly. The first two fronts did their mission well and some time after the great persian army had to be broken in three one to defend the north another the south and other to defend the border in the euphrates. But Alexander quickly attacked and in a short time he had faced and destroy the persian center army and killed their King Artaxerxes. after great triumph the Emperor let is soldiers raid some towns and then advanced to the capital of ctesiphon, sacking it and almost destroy it. But it wasn't all roses. The northern roman army had after an hard passing of the caucasus forced to retreat after a minor defeat against the Persian Northern army led by Shapur son of Artaxerxes but he wasn't a great general and the motivated and reinforced central roman army, who had been reinforced by the southern army defeated and captured Shapur.
The soldiers now with spoils and treasures where happy and celebrated their new favourite Alexander who gained the title of Persicus Maximus. Shapur, know humbled brokered an humiliating deal with Alexander that ceded all sassanid territory west of the tigris to Rome, formal control over Armenia, and an immense tribute in money.
Apart from this great defeat Shapur had to face revolts all over his empire.
The now know as Marcus Aurelius Severus Alexander Armeniacus Mesapotamicus Persicus Maximus had started a great reign but some dark clouds were aprouching


this text was retired from the book The Reign of The Second Alexander: Nomen Omen by a several historians, citing as sources Cassius Dio


I need a map of the Roman Sassanid Border before and after the war.

Sorry for the errors that you might find and feel free to coment
 
Looks good. I knew listening to Mike Duncan's History of Rome podcast would pay off eventually!

I suppose the problems of the Germans attacking the Danube frontier will still happen, although with morale much higher and the Emperor more popular they shouldn't shatter the empire and the regime like it did IOTL.
 
Alexander Severus.

I agree that had he been stronger, he could have easily defeated Persia. I don't think that this would have made that much difference though. I'm not sure how things were going in the north, as I recall increasing Germanic pressure there. It was getting really difficult for the Romans to keep the Persians at bay, as well as fight the Germanic tribes. Someone more familiar with this period should add here.
 
I agree that had he been stronger, he could have easily defeated Persia. I don't think that this would have made that much difference though. I'm not sure how things were going in the north, as I recall increasing Germanic pressure there. It was getting really difficult for the Romans to keep the Persians at bay, as well as fight the Germanic tribes. Someone more familiar with this period should add here.


Oh, he could defeat Persia all right. That happened on numerous occasions. Of course the Persians wouldn't stay defeated.
 
Dear Author,
1) I advice you to start a new thread with the title you have chosen

2) I do not think that there was any serious aspiration to conquer all the Roman East. Even Shapur's was more a make-booty-and-destry raid than a conquering campaign.
Certainly Atraxerxes was certainly not in a position to dream it.
Armenia would be the maximum of his ambition

3) Artaxerxes replied that he knew what he was doing and that he wanted to conquer the east.
From Atraxerxes point of view, he would refer to those lands as "the west" rather than "the east"
 
Dear Author,
1) I advice you to start a new thread with the title you have chosen

2) I do not think that there was any serious aspiration to conquer all the Roman East. Even Shapur's was more a make-booty-and-destry raid than a conquering campaign.
Certainly Atraxerxes was certainly not in a position to dream it.
Armenia would be the maximum of his ambition

3) Artaxerxes replied that he knew what he was doing and that he wanted to conquer the east.
From Atraxerxes point of view, he would refer to those lands as "the west" rather than "the east"

No, Artaxerxes told the Roman diplomats that he intended to remove the Romans from all Asia. It wasn't very practical, but he wanted to do it.
 
No, Artaxerxes told the Roman diplomats that he intended to remove the Romans from all Asia. It wasn't very practical, but he wanted to do it.

propaganda boasting =/= political objectives
I'd say that the declaration (if it was done at all and it is not an exaggeration of a roman author) was aimed at this own subjects for propaganda reasons (I will make Persia great again) rather than being an actual agenda of foreign politics
 
The Triumph and the Rhine problem

For years Germanic tribes pressed at rome's borders and Alexander Severus reign was no exception.
After is smashing victory against the Sassanids Alexander returned back to Rome after leaving some trusted advisors in the East to run the new provinces he conquered and a new governor in Mesopotamia. When He arrived in Rome the population came til the 50 kilometer mark to greet the great Alexander Severus, waving olive branches. Upon his entrance he celebrated a great triumph, showing the most spectacular treasures seized in the campaign,this was the first real triumph in many years ( the last had been mock triumphs). Alexander also constructed a great monumental arch wich still stands today and his a little bigger than the arch of Septimius Severus.
But the celebrations where interruped when notices arrived of germanic raids in the rhine provinces, perpetrated by Berengar, leader of a new germanic coalition forged in the abscence of some rhine legions in the east.
How would the great Alexander Severus deal with this coalition


this text was retired from the book The Reign of The Second Alexander: Nomen Omen by a several historians, citing as sources Cassius Dio


I really need a map of the Roman Sassanid Border before and after the war and a map of the rhine frontier if there's a mapmaker out there who would help me with the job please get in touch with me

Sorry for the errors that you might find and feel free to coment
 
i finally have the maps

alexanderseveruswar.png


the blue is the territory annexed by rome and the yellow is armenia who as annexed the res is self explaining


alexanderseveruswar2.png


A- Northern roman army movement

B - Alexander army ( central) movement

C - Southern army movement

d- sassanid army and it's moves

e- sack of ctesiphon

f- last of the war aginst an reorganized sassanid army

the maps are a bit large
 
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After is smashing victory against the Sassanids Alexander returned back to Rome after leaving some trusted advisors in the East to run the new provinces he conquered and a new governor in Mesopotamia.


If past history is any guide, he probably needn't have bothered. These gains will probably be lost again as soon as his back is turned. Even the most "smashing" victory is likely to be short-lived.
 
back again

Alexander Germanicus

Following the news of the Invasion of the roman province of lower rhine led by a leader who is know as Berengar, probably leader of the Allamani or other tribe near the Alamani, who were eyeing rome since caraccala had killed several of their warriors and sent a legion agaisnt them. Berengar had convinced several tribes from the Lower RHine to unify in a coalition and decided to strike because of the absence of the Rhine legions who were with the emperor.

Alexander quickly set off with the Rhine legions plus some eastern auxiliaries. Arriving only few weeks after leaving Rome the emperor launched a small expedition agaisnt the allamani while he attacke the small tribes allied with the allamani. The expedition was a disaster and among the dead was the rising star of the legions a certain thracian named Gaius Julius Verus Maximinus. Cassius Dio who was going with the espedition to write about it in his histories was captured. Alexander who managed to defeat the samaller tribes in a decisive battle was furious when he learned that his favourite historian had been captured and the expediton was a disaster and quickly launched an brutal campaign against the Allamani managing to the defeat and kill Berengar in a battle know as the battle of the Severiana Allamania, after the Roman name for the city who is located at the site of the ancient battlefield.
The Allamani after beign defeated sued for peace and Alexander knowing that any land conquest beyond the Rhine would be suicidal imposed that the allamani would be forced to provide many auxiliaries, never attack rome or one of her allies or friend nor lend support to those who attacked rome. The new allamani king know by his latin name of Julius was a fervorous supporter of the Roman and remained loyal till his death.
This end the first chapter of the reign of the now Marcus Aurelius Severus Alexander Armeniacus Mesopotamicus Persicus Maximus Allamanicus

What honorific title should Alexander Receive for is great reign like Trajan gained optimus

I need maps and please feel free to comment
 
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