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Chapter 13 -III-

“Take this also!” Tiberius ordered the eunuch, whose name eluded him, pointing to a stack of books on the chamber’s one remaining table. The servant silently complied with the last command, before bowing and quietly sliding out of the room.

Content, having emptied his sleeping quarters, the Caesar took a final look at the bare walls and empty floors. Well, that’s about it… Suddenly, a crushing feeling of embarrassment and helplessness came over him, as his mind switched from the task at hand over to yet undone errands. Oh shit! Boniface sets out today! Whirling, he raced out of the chamber, and dashed towards the prefectural palace’s great hall, where Irene should have been sending the embassies off.

Damn, damn, damn! He was upset at himself for having forgotten; but, nevertheless, he had had a far too busy morning. In any case, this was no way for a man to spend his wedding day, he thought, while racing down the foyers, past the few remaining, rushing servants. But then again, these aren’t really relaxed times anymore.

As of late, rather unconsciously, he had begun to recognize more and more of the very real dangers that threatened their situation. Yes, his head had been in the clouds before, but ever since Anna had agreed to be his, and his alone, God had granted him the necessary peace of mind to focus on state affairs, like Theodosius would have liked him to. Or so he believed.


“Ave, Caesar!” saluted the two excubitores posted at the carved doorway, upon his arrival. Almost ignoring the salute, he signaled them hurriedly to open the gates and allow him into the room.

“…anything else that you might want to take with you?” he heard Irene asking, in Greek.

Upon coming into the almost vacant great hall, he discerned Pope Boniface standing serenely before the Empress in full regalia, his calm face bearing witness to the steadfastness of his faith, and surrounded on both sides by a train of priests and deacons. “No Augusta,” he replied, clutching at the golden crucifix that hung upon his chest. “All that we might ever need is already with us.”

“Apologies for the delay, Father,” Tiberius hastily said, approaching the small gathering.

“Ah, young Caesar! How noble of you to see us off!” the Pope answered, genuinely happy to see him, and bowing his head respectfully.

“Could not allow it to be any other way,” he added, grasping the Patriarch’s right wrist and shaking it firmly. Boniface and those of his retinue were about to face a demon incarnate; it was only decent enough of him to be present, and pray zealously for the Bishop of Rome’s ultimate success. He was glad to have made it.

“Well then Father, time is short, and the roads are treacherous,” Irene continued, swiftly. “Let us share a final prayer for your safety, and to ask the Lord to look kindly upon our endeavors.”

And following the final
Amen, the Pope departed. Tiberius almost felt sorrow for the older man, having nothing but his trust on divine protection to shield him from the claws of the brutish Avars. It was just unfortunate that the Romans could no longer spare a respectable guard for such a noble delegation, but Boniface seemed to be unperturbed; he was sure of his ultimate success, and of the Hand of Providence. Yet, he wondered, could God really replicate the luck that Pope Leo had experienced when visiting on that other scourge of His, Attila? What was to keep the Khagan from just skinning the helpless priest, seizing the gold presented, and continuing to pillage his way south?

Tiberie, heathen thoughts are too be shunned! Do not doubt the Lord!

“…Do not doubt the Lord…” he mumbled to himself.

“Nice of you to finally stop by,” his sister-in-law cut in.

He, startled by her voice, had not realized she had left his side, and was now standing by one of the gaping windows overlooking the old Forum, her back turned on him. “I’m sorry I wasn’t able to be here earlier…”

“I was not complaining.” She paused, looked down at her feet while clearing her throat, and then continued. “I do hope, however, you were not late because of the help.”

“I…” he began, before his discomfiture overtook him. He thought he had been quite discreet the entire time about his relationship with Anna, that everything would become known on his own terms, and when he chose to disclose it. But, I don’t think she knows about the rest…“…I am done with that, Irene. I know that there are far more pressing matters at hand.”

Her soft chuckle unnerved him, slightly. “Listen to yourself…” she said, turning around. “You are beginning to sound like your brother; or worse, your father.”

Theodosius’ wife, burdened with wars and invasion, still looked as gorgeous as ever. Clad in a deep red dress adorned with golden embroidery, and with her dark brown soft curls falling charmingly over her shoulders, she seemed unaffected by the stress of the disasters befalling the Romans. Her pale face, betrayed no telling wrinkles, and her bright greenish-hazel eyes were neither sunken in, nor surrounded by dark circles; on the contrary, her visage remained as fresh as ever, as if made of Parian marble. The Empress’ soft glow was a sharp contrast to the near empty room, whose furniture and ornaments had been quietly packed up and sent south.

“It is nigh time I acted the part of a Caesar,” he managed to say, his chest inflating somewhat on mention of his title.

An actual laugh escaped her this time. “I see, little brother. I think then, that your place is with Anastasia and Maurice. As the oldest, it is your duty to keep them safe.”

Little brother. He was annoyed at being tasked with childcare. “They are already safe, behind the walls of Naples and with Theodelinda. I should stay here with you, and look after the defenses of this city.”

She gave him a blank stare for a few seconds, before shaking her head a little. “I appreciate the thought and the offer, Tiberie. But you need to look after the family in case things do not go as planned here, and I can’t make it south on time...”

“Irene, I can…”

“If it makes it better, you can take the girl.”

He opened his mouth to answer, but thought the better of it. With a deep sigh, he attempted to change the subject. “Have we any word of Procopius?”

“Not yet,” she replied, crossing her arms across her chest, and beginning to walk towards him. “He should be reaching Domentziolus’ camp any day now.”

“Mhhhh,” he grunted. “Do you really think he’ll accept?” It was a genuine question.

She remained silent for a few moments. “There aren’t any certainties anymore, Tiberie,” she finally answered, listlessly, her eyes wandering to the mosaics on the floor, depicting an old, pagan satyr. “It’s hard to say…”

While her eyes were fixed on the ground, he thought he sensed her concealed vulnerability. His sister-in-law might have looked near unassailable, as strong a woman as his own mother, but the frail tone in her voice told him that she might soon be cracking. In spite of the favorable news from the East, she was being forced to send her own son away, the Franks hung over Italy threateningly like Damocles’’ sword, and a flood of barbarians from Scythia was rolling upon them like a tidal wave. Then, why wouldn’t I stay?

Attempting to comfort her, he approached her, and put his right arm over her shoulders. “I know…” he tried for a few moments to find the right words to reassure her. “…we can still have faith…like the Pope.”

She did not get to answer, as the door reverberated with a nervous pounding for a few short seconds, before a gaunt looking excubitor opened it, and marched gasping into the room, half saluting them both in Latin.

“Augusta, Caesar… you must leave the city at once! There…there are reports of Lombard raiding parties to the northwest!”

Straightening her back, and shedding his arm, the Empress lifted her gaze and strode coolly past the soldier, as she spoke, regaining her briefly lost composure. “The Caesar will leave for Naples within the hour, as planned. Make sure him and those in his entourage are escorted safely to their destination.”

“Yes, Empress!”

“Irene, wait!”

But his meager rebuff was snubbed; she strode back into the outer passage, without looking back, and left him alone with the shaken guard. Clenching a fist, he stood still, in anger. Goddammit!

“Caesar, I have my orders…”

“Yes, I heard her too!” he snapped back, frustrated. Whatever! If she wants to stay, she can do so…I don’t know why she tries to be such a bitch. He stormed out of the room, but his sister-in-law was nowhere to be seen. Incensed, and with his mind made up, he turned in the direction of the service area; still, closely behind him, trotted the guard. I have to show them…I’ll prove them all wrong!

“What’s your name soldier?” he asked the man, dryly.

“Maximus, Caesar. Maximus Albinus,” he replied, breathing heavily.

“Maxime, I will give you a pound of gold, if you get my wife to Naples, and gather a band of two hundred men as my personal escort, separate from the train. I will be taking a different route south,” Tiberius declared, in the firmest tone he could manage.

The man stopped on his tracks, but resumed his stroll almost immediately, as Tiberius did not halt. “Caesar, forgive me…y…your…wife?”

This time he stopped, and glanced back at the excubitor, cutting his eyes at him. “Yes, Maxime. My wife. You will ensure that she arrives safely to the city, and you will find me the men that I demand!”

Maximus’ stare dropped with docility to the ground. “Domine…there aren’t any men to spare…” he informed him, hesitantly. “Those that can fight, are being drafted to man the walls here…”

What…? “What about a hundred?”

“Caesar, the detachment tasked with your protection…consists only of twenty-five men…there were no others that could be spared…”

The Devil in hell, he thought. How can I prove them, then…that I’m not a boy any longer? Shaking his head in disappointment, and with his bright idea of valiantly meeting the Lombard raiders in the field in shambles, he resumed his rapid walk, and within minutes, was standing before the service quarters, whence a few maids, with disheveled hairs and wailing at the menacing news, still ventured from.

“You will wait here,” Tiberius ordered, pointing a finger downward. Without waiting for a reply, he stepped into the kitchens, and rushed for Anna’s “alcove.” Upon finding it, he tapped on the thin door three times, in quick succession. “It’s me.”

The girl opened it carefully, after recognizing him, let him in the tiny room, and nervously shut it behind him. It did not take Tiberius long to see that she was ready to leave, her few belongings packed in a small wooden chest by the doorway.

“Did anyone know?” she asked, anxiously.

”No, no one did. But don’t worry; when we get to Naples I will announce it publicly. I’m getting tired of hiding like thief!”

“I just… I was afraid that they would find out too soon. Or that the priest would speak, and I just didn’t want the Empress to give us…”

“Don’t you worry about her!” he interjected. “She’s staying here…and by the time she makes it south, she will face a fait-accompli. It’s done.”

Within seconds, a thin smile drew across his young bride’s face, while her brown eyes widened. “Come here, my love!” she exclaimed, throwing her arms gleefully around him.

Confidently, he took her in a tight embrace, and having kissed her forehead affectionately, he whispered in her ear, “let’s leave then. My wife.”
 
So order crumbles- and Tiberius has a nice little heartwarming moment. Hell, Anna may or may not be empress, because Theodosius is Schrodinger's Emperor- he's dead and alive, we just don't know!
 
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So the shit storm has finally reached the gates of Rome. I'm hoping for some kind of miracle to happen, maybe the Pope will be successful...

Let us all pray for his success, along with Irene and Tiberius, then...:p

Great update, can't wait for the next! Hopefully we'll stick with a Maurician focus for a while?

We will certainly be looking at a couple of Roman updates in the near future.

Theodosius is Schrodinger's Emperor

That, right there, is signature material. ;)
 
Chapter 13 -IV-

Incensed, he crushed the letter in his hand slowly, clenching his teeth to a slow grind. Before him, Procopius, the Maurician envoy, stared at him in utter silence from his seat, in the otherwise vacant tent. Domentziolus’ earlier triumphant outlook had been gradually turned on its head, as he learned of events across the world first from gossip amongst prisoners and deserters, then official reports from his tribunes, and finally, this portentous missive. Phocas dead, Constantinople lost, and Domentziolus caught. My own son seized like a damn Sklavenian dog.

He ran his left hand over his face in frustration, as he dropped the clump of papyrus onto the grassy ground, and sighed, exasperated. “Have you anything else to add?”


The patrician took a deep breath before resuming his case. “The offer you read on the letter is all that we can bring to the table, stratege. However, the Empress herself has authorized me to promise your son safe-passage to your camp, all the way from Cappadocia, and to ensure that his arrival will be expedited, and will take utmost priority.”


Domentziolus stood up from behind his desk, and began to pace gradually in front of the ambassador, trying to review the proposal. “If I refuse, my son will be killed, and we remain enemies. But Rome shall fall, and the Avars will advance south unchallenged until they meet my men.” He stopped and turned to face Procopius directly. “Is that correct?”


The older man shook his head, sternly. “Rome will not fall, but smaller towns might. And your unwillingness to end a war that is already lost for the usurping party, will only prolong the suffering of innocent Romans throughout the province. You are a reasonable man…”


He waved him to stop; he had no need for flattery anymore. Instead, he resumed his pacing, while he continued revising his prospects. His now dead brother had failed to properly notify him of his plans for Italy, and had instead expected him to remain in Africa until Carthage was taken. Domentziolus had only learned later of the machinations that had invited Bayan south, once he had arrived in the peninsula and had been able to reestablish some feeble contact, always contested by the enemy navy, with Constantinople. But although, technically, an alliance existed between his forces and those of the fast approaching nomads, one could never mistrust them enough; he had fought against them in the Danube, and had firsthand experience that led him to his own conclusions. Still, what can be salvaged of the situation?


He had not done too badly himself, with Syracuse and half of Sicily remaining in his hands, along with Rhegium and Tarentum, cities which surrendered after a brief display of force, due to the lack of defending garrisons. Only Brindisium had put up a halfhearted resistance, which collapsed when the first assault on its parapets took place, and the raw defenders fled their posts. But in the East, things were not as impeccable, since the Eastern armies had disintegrated or perhaps, more likely, defected to the Maurician force, taking Anatolia with them. In Europe, Constantinople was gone, seized by Priscus in the name of Theodosius, but his reach, fortunately, did not stretch past the neglected Anastasian Wall. And beyond, the countryside remained expectant for its new master, the boy Constantius, whom Phocas had crowned Caesar prior to his departure, but had mysteriously disappeared, while along the Danube Comentiolus remained uncertain of his next move, with his five-thousand strong army.


A five thousand men army, and the choice of becoming an Avar pawn…


“Stratege,”Procopius began, interrupting his train of thought. “Forgive my impertinence…but the Empress awaits my return as soon as practically possible…”


Once more, he stopped his pacing, and turned to face the diplomat. Alea iacta est. “Procopius, isn’t it?”


His guest assented, with composure.


“Procopie, a man your age, must have seen much. You must have experienced things that many of us later only learned from books, or old army stories…” he said, as he pulled a nearby stool, and took a seat directly in front of the increasingly apprehensive ambassador.


“Furthermore,” he continued, “you must personally have met individuals who are now in the deep sleep of death, awaiting Judgment Day, and soaked in the amazing stories they had to share about the epic events in their own lives.”


“Where are you trying to get with this, kyrie?” Procopius inquired abruptly, using the Greek title with a marked intonation.


“Fifteen years before your birth, the Goths, hemmed in by Belisarius, languished in desperation in Ravenna. When a godsend in disguise reached them, in the shape of the imperial peace offer, the canny general refused to sign it, certain of Romania’s ultimate victory. During your years as a bureaucrat in Italy, did you ever get to meet any of the veterans of said conflict?”


The emissary cleared his throat, and replied. “I did, indeed.”


Domentziolus leant forward, in his seat, slightly. “And, what did they say that Belisarius did then?”


“He accepted the counteroffer from the Goths, to crown himself as their lord and ruler…”


“Exactly,” he cut in, assenting eagerly, while he leant forward. “And then, what happened to him upon his victorious return to The City?”


“He was denied a triumph…”


“And what happened to Italy?”


“Stratege, I really do not have the time for rhetorical riddles, would you please get to the point!”


“Come on Procopie!” Domentziolus shouted, his eyes flashing as he got up so suddenly, that his seat fell clattering onto the ground. “Italy went to shit because of Imperial pride! If the Emperor had seen the benefit of one small betrayal, he would have been better served, and the war wouldn’t have lasted another decade and a half!”


Before him, the patrician remained unmoved.


With a groan, he went on. “If the Empress can really guarantee that my son will be delivered safely, and that I will not be punished for my trespasses under the past regime, Italy will be spared another long and excruciating war that might wreck it forever!”


There was a pause, before Procopius spoke in dull voice, having regained his briefly lost serenity. “Do I take it then, that you will accept the conditions mentioned in the letter?”


He took a deep breath before replying, his eyes searching for a sign on the face of the man before him, that might allow him to read him better, but to no avail. “I will accept the offer presented, provided that my life is guaranteed by Irene herself and by Pope Boniface, and that upon the conclusion of this war I be allowed to retire to Salona, undisturbed.”


The Carthaginian remained silent for another moment, leaning slowly back on his seat, pushing against the back of the ornate chair, as he fixed his eyes on Domentziolus’. “Done,” he finally said.


He felt as if a huge burden had been lifted off his shoulders, but still, he proceeded with caution. “Will this agreement be set down in writing?”


“Yes.”


“Will it bear the Empress’ seal as well as Boniface’s?”


Procopius sighed heavily. “Only Irene’s for the moment. Boniface has gone to try to dissuade the Khagan from continuing south…”


Really?
“Is he going to try to convert the savage?” he asked, curious.

“Were he to succeed, that would indeed by a miracle. Still, we would be content if he desisted and turned around, whether he continued praying to his demons, or not.”


Without the Pope, the treaty might lack the inviolable aura he was hoping for. He had to find someone else to guarantee the deal he was about to strike, and kept quiet as his mind raced through possible candidates, before a name popped abruptly into his thoughts. “Given that the Pope is not available then, I would like to suggest another guarantor for the treaty.”


The old diplomat stood up, and began rearranging his tunic, as he responded, dismissively. “It can be whomever you like. But as guarantee of your acceptance, I need to take the required five hundred-men detachment that the document demanded.”


He smiled, appeased. “Absolutely, my dear friend. Let us tend to that problem immediately, so you can be on your way!”


They stepped out of the tent together, where Theophilus, his faithful doryphoros, and Sergius, a recently promoted tribune, awaited expectantly.


“Tribune, assemble the second and third turmae and prepare them to set out within the hour. You will be leading them; thus, I need you report back to me before departing,” Domentziolus ordered curtly. The soldier saluted, mutely, and dashed to fulfill his orders.


“I will be with the men,” Procopius said with the same impassive face, as he stretched out a hand to him. “It has been a pleasure to talk to you, stratege.”


“A pleasure indeed, ambassador,” he retorted, shaking his extended limb.


As the figure of the Maurician envoy lost itself in the milling crowd, he returned to the relative quiet of the tent followed by Theophilus, chuckling at his good fortune. “It seems, doryphore, that we are again on the winning side,” he commented jovially, walking to his desk.


The younger man remained silent, standing at attention by the entrance.


“At ease, soldier.” He ordered, gesturing with his hand as he took a seat. “But we might have made more enemies as well; all of the barbaricum, from the Ocean to the Euxine will come down on our heads…In any case, I want you to go to Syracuse, and bring me Marcellinus.”


“The arrested bishop, stratege?”


“Yes, yes. That one,” he answered, tapping his fingers lightly on the desktop. “I am certain that he will be glad to have his freedom back, in exchange for a few signatures.”


“Sir?”


A sarcastic smile cut its way across his bushy beard. “Theophile, don’t you see? That dog of a bishop will have to bark on our behalf now!”
 
Domentziolus the Elder making the pragmatist's choice, and Italy getting better... until one considers Bayan.

I'm actually kind of hoping they lose in Italy and win in the East, because, IMO, Italy was sort of a prestige project (like Carthago Spartaria and perhaps Africa) that the Byzzies just couldn't hold on to.

And maybe Kavadh will find a way to get back at Khosrau II...
 
Just echoing the other comments: as always, this is brilliant stuff. I wonder, though, would people refer to the Great Justinian in quite such aggressive terms within living memory of his death?

... Well, answering that question myself, they would. Justinian was an upjumped peasant who generally refused to treat the aristocracy as anything other than a taxable resource, so I suppose it's quite reasonable that the sons of those noblemen would look at him with contempt and disgust. That said, Domentziolus isn't a nobleman.

Never mind, it's a minor issue.

As ever, I enjoy the Tiberius POVs, and as I suspected might happen, cracks are beginning to appear in the Maurician family back in Italy. Should Theodosius really be dead, then I'd imagine Tiberius will look like a considerably better bet for Emperor than the little boy Maurice, but of course Irene and her partisans (now including Domentziolus?) won't see it that way. Are the seeds for more civil war being sown even as this one starts to burn itself out?

And of course, there's "the boy Constantius", backed by the richest family of the Empire, to consider: I hope he's not been forgotten about!
 
Another awesome update! Italy is looking all the more salvageable...

Like Tsar Gringo said, it’s better until one considers the Avars. And the Franks.
Domentziolus the Elder making the pragmatist's choice, and Italy getting better... until one considers Bayan.

I'm actually kind of hoping they lose in Italy and win in the East, because, IMO, Italy was sort of a prestige project (like Carthago Spartaria and perhaps Africa) that the Byzzies just couldn't hold on to.

And maybe Kavadh will find a way to get back at Khosrau II...
Africa and Spartaria are relatively safe from harm, and should Italy be lost altogether, it won’t necessarily mean the disintegration of Roman rule in the West, given those two springboards, in addition to all of the islands (Sicily, et al.)
I'm loving this Roman focus, expect we're still on a massive cliff hanger. :p Hope the Theodosius reveal is soon.
And just as I promised, we’re heading back east in the next chapter for more Roman shenanigans!
Just echoing the other comments: as always, this is brilliant stuff. I wonder, though, would people refer to the Great Justinian in quite such aggressive terms within living memory of his death?

... Well, answering that question myself, they would. Justinian was an upjumped peasant who generally refused to treat the aristocracy as anything other than a taxable resource, so I suppose it's quite reasonable that the sons of those noblemen would look at him with contempt and disgust. That said, Domentziolus isn't a nobleman.

Never mind, it's a minor issue.

As ever, I enjoy the Tiberius POVs, and as I suspected might happen, cracks are beginning to appear in the Maurician family back in Italy. Should Theodosius really be dead, then I'd imagine Tiberius will look like a considerably better bet for Emperor than the little boy Maurice, but of course Irene and her partisans (now including Domentziolus?) won't see it that way. Are the seeds for more civil war being sown even as this one starts to burn itself out?

And of course, there's "the boy Constantius", backed by the richest family of the Empire, to consider: I hope he's not been forgotten about!
And as ever BG, your feedback is greatly appreciated. With regards to the minor issue: the scene recently described is a private conversation in which Domentziolus tries to compare himself to Belisarius, while hinting at Imperial (regardless of the particular Emperor) aloofness and pride, which has a “tendency” to be damaging to the overall Roman cause, unless the “generals” are given a free hand, as it were.

To sum up the rest of the crowd:

Tiberius: anxious to prove his worth, but at 13 hardly taken seriously while Irene is firmly in charge.

Irene: increasingly desperate about the worsening situation on her hands, but hardly bothered by her brother-in-law’s puerile tantrums.

Constantius: MIA, but likely in the hands of Alexander, and a potential figure around which Phocas’ loyalists might rally.
Quo usque tandem abutere, Pururauka, patientia nostra? ;)

I just can't wait to know what happened to Theodosius.
Amice,

Diu
, vos patienter exspectavistis. Proxima parte, fatum Imperatoris scietur, promitto!


And of course, thanks to all of you for reading and commenting!
 
[FONT=&quot]Chapter 14 -I-
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The stag was unlike any other he had ever seen before. Its coat, made of gleaming white, thin fur, glistened against the blinding sunrays, while straight, ringed black horns rose towering from its protuberant forehead. Its slender legs and underbelly seemed to be slightly darker than its back; almost a very light brown. But its face, however, was its most peculiar feature; on a white background, thick dark stripes cut their way across the neckline, adorned the forehead, and streamed down from the horns to the prominent nose.

It was also surprising, he was soon to realize as he observed the odd creature in amazement and half exposed, that the lone animal had not detected him yet, while it drank calmly from the thin stream that meandered its way west, moistening the soil around it and allowing a few scattered patches of green grasses to grow nearby. So dazzled was he by the beast’s uniqueness that, upon recognizing his amateurish error, as his horse neighed softly, tapping the dry ground with one of its front hooves impatiently, he decided to act. Trying to measure the distance by narrowing his eyes, he gently patted his mount on the neck, relaxing it; his prey was perhaps a mere sixty, or seventy, feet away. Noiselessly, he strung his elegant golden bow, and then proceeded to stealthily pull an arrow out of the quiver fastened to the saddle. Quietly now…

But perhaps it was his own scent, as the soft breeze blew away from him, that warned the animal. Its muscles tensed visibly and its head reared up brusquely, before it darted away, kicking up clouds of desert dust as it did so. Irked, he dropped the arrow back into its case, and nudged the sides of the stallion with his knees to give pursuit, while seizing up the reins with his left hand. He trailed behind, some distance away from his target, until he reached an oddly placed rocky outcrop, which forced him to slow down and proceed with caution as he entered the constricted path in its midst.

Navigating the small stony maze, he tried to remember more of the lessons of the chase. It had been years, most certainly, since he had last gone hunting with Germanus, now long dead, in the Thracian forests around The City. Then, shortly after his marriage, he had finally been convinced to take up the sport which, hitherto, he had failed to find appealing. But even after a few rounds of practice, the number of kills he had achieved could be counted with one hand, and he had still failed to take a particular liking to it. Which only made the situation he was in now, hunting alone, all the more puzzling.

…Where are the guards? …Where is anyone? …And, why am I out here, of all things, deer stalking for that matter?


An increasing sense of uneasiness came over him. The memories of events preceding the chase were scant. The faces of his family, for he somehow knew he had one, were but a blurred reminiscence. Nevertheless, he still knew they existed. A wife, possibly a son, whose names he could barely recall, and he knew not where they were, or why he had left them behind.

Suddenly a noise to his left, a single small stone tumbling down the side of the ridge, recalled his attention from his musings. The bull could not be too far off. Urging his mount on, he passed through the winding trail, and, upon exiting it, reached another dry, barren plain like the one he had just left behind. Still, the animal was nowhere to be seen. Glancing angrily about, somewhat irritated with the now rising heat, he gave up sighting heavily, and began to look at the shades on the ground for direction, attempting to find the way whence he had originally come.

…Where did I come from?


Attempting to orient himself, he wiped the thickening drops of sweat off his brow, and realized he was not wearing a helmet; furthermore, he seemed to be attired with a heavily jeweled lōros, instead of the more casual tunic and chlamys. That’s odd, he thought to himself with a chuckle, vaguely recalling that such a piece of the Imperial costume was not usually worn during sporting events.

And it was then, that his ears first alerted him to the danger; but, alas, not quickly enough. As the horse neighed nervously, at the sound of the nearing danger it was unable to see because of its blinders, he looked up and distinguished the stag charging at him from around the southern end of the outcrop, head lowered and horns aimed straight at him.

He pulled on the reins abruptly, trying to whirl the steed around, but only managed to startle the charger further. His mount reared back in terror, as the buck slammed into the horse’s hindquarters, throwing it to the ground, and one of the horns cut through the lower end of his lōros, contriving to insert itself between him and his thick belt.

With his colt collapsing to the ground on a cloud of dust, nickering and biting at the air, he himself was dragged away by the now thoroughly flustered prey, having landed on his back, the wind knocked out of him. The animal began running at such a speed, that it soon became impossible for him to straighten up and attempt to unbuckle his girdle to set himself free. Instead, while his backside was being dragged on the rocky soil, albeit protected by the heavily embroidered garment, his head bumped defenseless on the ground repeatedly; at one point, he could even feel a gash opening somewhere atop his skull.

Oh, Christ…


The last he saw, was the dust clearing up momentarily, as the oryx turned around and headed back towards the exposed bedrock. With his eyes tearing from the dirt kicked up against his face, he impotently discerned the shapes of the sharp stones looming closer, though his arms struggled hopelessly to loosen the animal’s antler off his leathery band. Ultimately, he was unable to do it in time. And when his head smashed on the side of a grey boulder, his world went immediately blank.

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“Why are you here?”

He rubbed his eyes involuntarily, astonished at being free from the sheer terror that had stifled him earlier, but could not distinguish anything around him; it was still all concealed by a blinding, imprecise, white radiance. But that voice…

“I asked you a question, boy. Why are you here?”

Yes, the voice was unmistakable. It shook him thoroughly, and his mind froze in disbelief. “I… I…don’t…”

“I didn’t think so. It isn’t your time yet; pick yourself up, and don’t forget what I last said to you.”

“Sir…Father…”

“Remember that you are also Emperor, act like one.”

***​

With the greatest of efforts Theodosius managed to open his eyes, only to find himself in an unknown room, bedridden, and with a dull ache on his left side. Unsure of whether he was still dreaming, or had truly died and visited on his father, he clenched his fists tightly, digging his nails into his palms. There’s pain…that’s good, isn’t it?

Gradually, as his weakened optic nerves adjusted to the soft light of dusk, he realized that he was not alone in the alien chamber, however. For in a corner near the one narrow window, reading a book quietly, sat calmly his young Egyptian emissary, Dioskoros Psimanobet. He now knew he was alive.

“Dio…Dioskore…” he managed to blurt out, to his companion’s sudden surprise. “…where…where am I?”

The stunned man rushed to the bedside, and dropping to his knees, stared intently at his Emperor, while his mouth twisted in silence, muted by his amazement.

“I…said where… am I?” Theodosius stuttered insistently, grunting softly as he awakened fully, opening his eyes wider.

Dioskoros finally managed to smile feebly, before uttering a visibly exultant reply. “Christe eleison! There…is much, too much, that you must learn about, Kyrie!”
 
He...... LIIIIIVVVVVEEEESSSSSS! The question is answered!

I was kind of hoping for him to be dead, but his survival now cannot prevent his eventual mortality. That, and I want the Persians to get their comeuppance ;)
 
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So Theodosius is alive. Who else will he have to face to gain the empire? IIRC, Phocas had two brothers, Comentiolus and Domentziolus, and a nephew, also named Domentziolus. IOTL, the Domentziolus the Elder was executed, Comentiolus tried to overthrow Heraclius from Ankyra but was assassinated and Domentziolus the Younger was spared execution and eventually had three children.

How much longer will TTL have to go after Theodosius comes to the throne?
 
He lives! :D Very interested in seeing how the negotiations with the Persians are going, their armies are going have to meet up at some point.
Remember that Khosrau has already declared open war, and it was while awaiting those orders that Shahrbaraz and Shahin both stopped their offensives, as they had come against Maurician detachments both in Palestine and Anatolia, respectively.
He...... LIIIIIVVVVVEEEESSSSSS! The question is answered!

I was kind of hoping for him to be dead, but his survival now cannot prevent his eventual mortality. That, and I want the Persians to get their comeuppance ;)
We’ll all die anyhow at some point, right?

And the comeuppance might not be coming, if at all, for quite some time…
So Theodosius is alive. Who else will he have to face to gain the empire? IIRC, Phocas had two brothers, Comentiolus and Domentziolus, and a nephew, also named Domentziolus. IOTL, the Domentziolus the Elder was executed, Comentiolus tried to overthrow Heraclius from Ankyra but was assassinated and Domentziolus the Younger was spared execution and eventually had three children.

How much longer will TTL have to go after Theodosius comes to the throne?
Welcome aboard! Tsar Gringo’s got it right for both Doms. Comentiolus is still nominally in charge of the “police” forces along the Danube, and, as of yet, hasn’t met up with the Apions.

Theodosius is already Emperor, by the way. He was crowned by Maurice IOTL in 590, at the tender age of 7 (or 5, if you believe Theophanes the Confessor.) If what you mean is how long the story will go on after the current civil war ends, then there’s quite a bit left still. The general idea stretches into the early 640s.

May I perhaps suggest the Wiki page, for easy reference with names and stuff?


Anyone else? I know we’ve had quite a number of views since the update was posted, and I thought the majority of those who cheered for the “hero” would, at least, be glad to see him live!
 
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