I'm sorry, I just had to post this again. Its even more appropriate for this chapter then the last one.
As for the last two chapters, my god, youve turned Goodyear into a total bastard. I've said before you were good at turning good people into bad people and vice versa, and youve done a perfect job here. An famous inventor turned into a morally corrupt gilded age capitalist on steroids.
The Republican Union has really become a reactionary state, as seen not only by Goodyear's antics, but by the invasion of Vermont. These are brutal tactics to say the least, even by the standards of the time.
I liked the Uncle Tom's Cabin analog. Simply ingenouis how you've single handily switcheroed the north and south, and is just a brilliant and tragic irony. The North becomes a backward, racist and anti immigrant state using slave labor to its hearts content, while the Southern nations are prosperous and slave labour is much more relaxed than OTL. Is the cotton gin butterflied IITL? If so it makes even more sense for slavery to be fazed out in the south. I especially wonder how this will effect race relations in the South.
I now you said most naitons would be "bad guys" in this, but so far the Southern nations seem like the good guys. This could change though.
As for a latter chapter, very well done. I liked the newspaper snippets as the intro.
Its very possible that Napoleon was poisoned in my opinion. Theres just too much evidence for it. As for Napoleon II's assassination attempt, I almost thought he would kick the bucket for a sec there. Its the prefect doomsday scenario for authoritarianism in 19th century Europe. More radicalism, even more brutal crackdowns. It seems as if France's puppet state's will follow along, nipping European democracy in the bud. Simply genius D), yet tragic in a way as well ().
Some final questions; Napo, will you post this in the Finished Timelines and Scenarios board? The rules are here by the way. 2000 words seems to be the maximum, and this has plenty more than that I imagine.
Secondly, who are the current Counsels of the R.U. We havnt known who the R.U. counsels have been since the War of 1812. Is a list of Counsels coming up then?
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