This is good - enjoying this alot.
I like that Cecil has survived.
Cracking - all he needs now is son to be born as he arrives home ;)
If it is a boy, I know he wants it to be named after himself but for his...
Well if it's a boy Mary will be able to get whatever she wants from Henry.
I quite like this plan.
It could work brilliantly - i don't think it will but it could.
Maybe i'm looking at it from the sense of knowing in real life Henry married Anne.
Maybe i phrased it wrong.
I meant - the way it read to me was that Henry was eyeing Anne up (regardless of age). So Marie came in hard on the...
I also sense trouble.
I also like how Marie tried to get ownership of Anne being at court.
Well she had Henry dancing how she wanted him.
That felt quite real, in the rage that Henry had.
You would of thought Wolsey would of known it's a bad idea to go behind Henry's back, it'll...
That was very sweet. . . or very politic.
Either way, brilliant writing as usual.
Bessie won't take it well, not will her family - so i look...
Well that point will be rammed home then XD
She has over-reached, really over-reached.
Henry, will be a lot more cautious around till she's packed off. Whereas if she'd played her cards...
Well i'm happy for Henry actually, this might push him into moving on so to speak.
Be interesting to see how he takes Marie seeing his daughter,...
That was well written and horribly sad :(
I really look forward to the reaction of Henry to Marie's conversation about Mary because knowing Henry...
That is very sweet.
The was devastatingly emotional.
This is decent, just read through the first 5 chapters.
Thanks for putting it up.
Wow, that tugged on the heart strings.
Poor Henry - if it's a boy he'll torture himself that he should of married her so the child was legitimate.
Poor Henry, I really do feel for him in this.
Bizarrely i think this will actually work for Henry.
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