That's a pretty damn good TL, actually. Thank you for not bogging down in ACW minutiae. The only thing I wondered about was a comment towards the end about 'French India'. Was this one of those out-of-place lines?
Not that one. I really shouldn't have posted it to begin with; it's for a novel I'm working on. In fact, I think I'll remove it from the site.
Anything else is fair game though.