Poor Johann. I doubt he'll ever be able to get a rest until the war is over. I still really like him.
I can't quite work out what is meant by "The grip on his shoulder increased as De Gaulle's eyes". There's something missing, but I can't work out what.
Other than Goebbels (who as far as we know Hitler has not even met yet, despite them both being communists), which OTL Nazis have featured? Perhaps I'm wrong, but I can't really remember any others who might be communist rather than far right in their ideology so far. I'm not sure why you would...
The POD clearly means the Mayor of London only came in as a directly elected post in 2012. It's also led to Nick Hurd being a Secretary of State rather than a junior minister. It also seems quite old, I think, given there is an Ecology group in the Assembly rather than a Green group. What...
I don't know why, but I get the impression that Torvald Magnussen and his supposed writings are well researched fan fiction (possibly an author avatar in Torvald). Interesting though.