Recent content by decker

Nice work, Are you interested in someone correcting your mistakes in French? I didn't look at the whole map, but you misplaced my hometown 'Nice', on your map it would be east of the border. Cheers

Looks good, I had some fun once with south america, but your graphic rendering looks way nicer than mine.

I really like conlangs, but I tend to go phonetic when I write them. Maybe you could add romanian diacretics to it pops out more as non french :)

Map looks really nice, looks like you are having a hard time with French noun gender, I would recommend using google translate if you don't want to check every word one by one. pays latins le règne Not sure you are aiming for French here: Empire européen Gouvernement polonais Rome

I believe you need to rephrase that sentence, maybe you dislike the attitude of the few French people you've met and you feel the language has an undeserved aura considering all its inconsistencies, but saying you hate a people and a language seems a bit uncalled for. For your lack of success...

Sometimes you need to master something enough to make it deviate from the norm. Otherwise it just looks like a mistake. If you use gendered adjectives you shouldn't use them inconsistantly for the same noun. But you could easily make a spelling reform, or even one that hints a consitant...

I too am French, and follow the thread every day if anyone needs feedback. Looks great. PS : DracoLazarus missed this one : Petite Louisiane

Nice map, A few things don't feel like standard French... If you are aiming for non standard French, then its fine. Else here is what I'd change : Petite-Roche Baton-Rouge L'Oiseau Saint-Augustin NOUVELLE HELVETIE CADILLAC MISSISSIPPI PS : Le Pas seems a really unlikely capital, either of...

You learn something every day, I'll have to see if my spanish friends knew about that...

Looks really good. You should fix the alignment on Hauts-de-France, is the an extra space ? Remove the s at 'à l'opportunistes Suisse'

I would change the falangist symbol on the flag and put a 3 or 5 pointed star in its place. Unless in your story anarchist join the facists... Appart from that it all looks good. I assume the federation capital is Merida as it is a midway between Madrid and Lisbon, nice touch. Maybe show the...

Except that 'mon bien' is usually used as 'well being', when out of context and the plural 'mes biens', would be clear but unformal, like 'For god and my stuff'

Sorry but it would need to be "Dieu et ma propriété", as in French possessive pronouns agree with the object and not the subject, and property is feminin. However it would be very awkward, as it would sound the same as "Dieu est ma propriété", which means "God is my property". The same problem...

I really like most flags. What I don't like : on Alabama, Arkansas and Florida the star is so big it looks childish to me. The National flag looks goofy. I'm not sure it follows unwriten rules of flag design (maybe make the 3 parts equal in width). Globally nice effort.

Very nice. If you want to put even more energy into it, please give province names and capitals. You can also specify the leader name and the polictical party in charge. And religions too...