I'm interested to read about South Africa and Rhodesia. It would make a lot of sense for Rhodesia to join South Africa, is there any chance of this? It was something seriously considered in the late 1920s IOTL. There are a few obstacles to this, but they are not insurmountable.
I was just wondering, what's the strength of BGE forces in Northern Ireland at this point?
Also I just noticed this, in the update you mentioned that an overloaded Vickers Vernon escaping the revolution crashed off Dunkirk in August 1927, but I assume you meant 1925? :p
Can't wait for more! :)
Interesting stuff, I really enjoyed the level of detail you provided about the SRB's military.
The CM appears to be unwieldy and terribly corrupt. I think it would rapidly crumble if the SRB was invaded.
I think you are, or were, making assumptions about what Lord Brisbane is trying achieve with this TL.
Why do the good and bad things need to balance? Was there a balance in the Soviet Union? Was there a balance in the Third Reich? I don't understand why you feel there needs to be a balance.
This sounds somewhat patronising. It really feels like you are attempting to impose your opinions on this TL. That's all they are, your opinions. Just because you think there is something amiss does not make it so.