I've been easing myself back into AH lately and when I found this one I couldn't stop reading.
Of course I find it right when you're going on a mini-hiatus, right? But I must compliment you on the regular, high-quality updates you've been putting out thus far. I'm especially impressed by the globe-trotting, we're really being shown a whole
world here. I will say what caught my attention is (initially) Neutral Fascist Italy, a POD I've always thought was woefully underutilized for proper TLs as opposed to just speculative discussion (and one of the very best and most detailed TLs on the subject,
@Geekhis Khan's
Viva Balbo, sadly went on indefinite hiatus just as it was barely getting started).
I just got through this timeline, and boy I have to find it dark (but in a good way, not in Darkness-Induced-Audience-Apathy dark).
I was noticing this too, I normally prefer lighter TLs and this is
by no means light, but I guess given the glut of post-apocalyptic and nuclear WWIII TLs we've had over the years - or even straight-up dystopias just for the sake of being dystopias - this one doesn't seem as bleak even though lots of
horrible things have happened.
You also have a talent for turning a phrase, the dialogue and quotes throughout are excellent and also help to make the TL feel "lived-in". When you
do return from your well-deserved break, please keep up the good work!