Very nice update, Sarge! My thoughts;
-It seems that Missouri's inclusion in the Confederacy was a much larger anti-slavery catalyst than many would've thought. Then again, given historical Southron inclusionism towards the state and its membership in the CSA ITTL, this seems to be a case of “givin' Dixie what it wants, 'till they cain't take it no mo'”. And Mark Twain's role in the movement is frankly inspired
. Finally, the notion of dovetailing abolitionism with general anti-Planter sentiment and industrial progressivism seems like a good way to grant moral support across the country.
-I have to agree with JE that the success of the Labor Movement, or at least Abolitionism, probably wouldn't be successful for another 10-15 years or so (although the argument could be made that, more so than OTL's
causus belli, slavery was a secondary issue to perceived acts of government-sponsored murder of Southrons in Kansas and seen as less-than-vital for the Cause). Still, if you scoot the date back a bit, things would be far more definite. If anything, it gives the average Dix more clarity in what they're fighting against (getting rid of that damnable property voting requirement should also be one of the first things to go, not just slavery).
-I'm surprised there wasn't any attempt to undercut Stephen A. Douglas' roots as a Northerner during his political career (although there's an interesting parallel with Fremont there, as having originated from the other future country to serve their actual one). Am I to understand then that his role in preserving Confederate lives and property in St. Louis gives him a little bit more "street cred"?
-The internal movement of freedmen and their families within the South makes a ton of sense to me (and incidentally, it seems they mostly went to the Trans-Mississippi and Upper South which were more progressive AND more modernized than the rest at that point in history even before the POD). But I noticed a possible error, in that IIRC Florida wouldn't have been the first black-majority state in the region as I believe South Carolina and/or Mississippi had that honor first (I may be wrong at this point in history however).
-I don't think you made this clear, but where is the US' capital in TTL? I don't think it should be D.C. (at least, not the capital of government, although a ceremonial/economic center isn't so problematic), as it would directly abut an international border and sit vulnerable to potential attack once the war moratorium expires (not that the attack is forthcoming, but there's a reason very few capitals lie next to a border IOTL). Perhaps Philly would work, or a city further to the west like Chicago?
-It's interesting (although not really surprising), how the Yanks have adopted both the Western and “Americana” as artistic genres as opposed to the CSA. Musically, I wonder what implications this'll have in the future for either country?
-Thomas Gray did indeed bring the Department Store to “the Eat”, but I'm sure the East benefited from its introduction as well
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Keep up the good work!