The Troubled One
Banned
Prologue: Varuna's Bile
The Katalkonda, liege of the Kozhikode Company, in service to Ilamcetcenni Chola IV, conqueror of Srivijaya, Lanka, and the Ganga
The Inner Pacific, near Pihemanu Kauihelani(Midway Atoll) 1652 C.E
The seawind bit deep into Ponniyar as he planted himself at the gunwale of the pani, feeling the spray ice into him, into his hair, his skin, his bones. This was not earth. He would not believe that gods were so cruel. Twice he had seen long black coils slice through the water and within his soul he knew that these waters were haunted by nagas out of hell, that any second the waters would explode into a throng of black snakes that would surge aboard and sheath their fangs in the calves of his crew. Thunder drummed above. Ponniyar hated thunder, had cursed at it from the prows of a thousand ships, but all he could do now was cower from its voice and this he did like a bedraggled rat, salt whiting his beard, his teeth clapping in grim applause at the fury of the ocean.
The waters howled. Like a cobra the sea reared up and its strike was worse than a thousand punches. The world became maddening cold; he fell hard on his arse and skidded across the broken wood of the deck, too strongly and suddenly for him to even pray for deliverance. One of his brothers was screaming in the distance. Ponniyar was sobbing. Gods hate him, he was sobbing. What else was there to do? The oars were broken, the sails smashed, the sky a black banshee that howled and spat lightning down to kill them; the world was cold, colder than knives, narayana narayana narayana, I don’t want to die…
He felt a hand at his shoulder, grabbed it in a vice grip. His eyes met his sister’s. Her face was salt, blood, splinters, life. “Revati,” he choked. “Revati, I don’t want to drown.”
“Brother,” she gasped, spitting out freezing water. “Brother, there is land ahead. The birds, they’re going mad below, they can sense it. “
For a moment he goggled at her. “The birds? Are you insane? Of course they’re going mad; we’re in a bloody storm! Revati, I don’t want to die!”
“What in Narak am I supposed to do about that, Ponni?” her voice was shrill. “Narayana, oh narayana…Ponni, move!”
She grabbed him by the neck and flung both of them to the side. A wave slapped the bow and a Koryon cannon crashed down the deck, missing them by inches. It was bigger than a boar. It hit the mast, skidded off sideways, slapped some floundering soul across the chest. They heard him roar once before he flew into the frothing ocean. The sea reared up, smacked the ship like a bowling pin. They hit the bosun’s cabin hard, and they gasped as one person, the breath smashed out of their gullets.
Somehow the crow’s nest remained standing. From that impossible roost they saw Werringi, the lookout, stand up, defying the cataclysm. He loosed a hellish cry. “Ulvaram palaivattuuuu!” Reef incoming!
“No!” Revati fought her way to her feet. A wave clobbered her to her knees, but she spat into the deck and pushed herself back up. “Damn you, storm, you will not take my ship!”
Somehow, incredibly, there was calm. For one long moment no thundercrack sizzled the pregnant sky, no monster wave clouted their ship, no shower of rain drenched them yet further.
Then a horrible jarring crush as the pani met the maw of the reef, a deep snarling crunch as its granite teeth tore into the hull of the ship, a million nails on a million chalkboards, a million screams as the sailors surrendered to the sea, on and on that awful soulslicing bellow of “Palivattu! Palaivattuuuu!”. Revati cursed, the sky howled, Ponniyar gave up.
He felt the sea kiss him, and fell headfirst into oblivion.
Notes/Glossary
Pani: The workhorse ship of the cankam, or corporations, of the colonial era, used for transport and exploration. These were captained by nobles of the seafaring castes, some of whom were women.
Also, should I switch this to the writer's forum or to ASB? Some of the factors involved in this story lead to a nearly unrecognizable version of history, so a switch to the later forum might be neccessary.
The Katalkonda, liege of the Kozhikode Company, in service to Ilamcetcenni Chola IV, conqueror of Srivijaya, Lanka, and the Ganga
The Inner Pacific, near Pihemanu Kauihelani(Midway Atoll) 1652 C.E
The seawind bit deep into Ponniyar as he planted himself at the gunwale of the pani, feeling the spray ice into him, into his hair, his skin, his bones. This was not earth. He would not believe that gods were so cruel. Twice he had seen long black coils slice through the water and within his soul he knew that these waters were haunted by nagas out of hell, that any second the waters would explode into a throng of black snakes that would surge aboard and sheath their fangs in the calves of his crew. Thunder drummed above. Ponniyar hated thunder, had cursed at it from the prows of a thousand ships, but all he could do now was cower from its voice and this he did like a bedraggled rat, salt whiting his beard, his teeth clapping in grim applause at the fury of the ocean.
The waters howled. Like a cobra the sea reared up and its strike was worse than a thousand punches. The world became maddening cold; he fell hard on his arse and skidded across the broken wood of the deck, too strongly and suddenly for him to even pray for deliverance. One of his brothers was screaming in the distance. Ponniyar was sobbing. Gods hate him, he was sobbing. What else was there to do? The oars were broken, the sails smashed, the sky a black banshee that howled and spat lightning down to kill them; the world was cold, colder than knives, narayana narayana narayana, I don’t want to die…
He felt a hand at his shoulder, grabbed it in a vice grip. His eyes met his sister’s. Her face was salt, blood, splinters, life. “Revati,” he choked. “Revati, I don’t want to drown.”
“Brother,” she gasped, spitting out freezing water. “Brother, there is land ahead. The birds, they’re going mad below, they can sense it. “
For a moment he goggled at her. “The birds? Are you insane? Of course they’re going mad; we’re in a bloody storm! Revati, I don’t want to die!”
“What in Narak am I supposed to do about that, Ponni?” her voice was shrill. “Narayana, oh narayana…Ponni, move!”
She grabbed him by the neck and flung both of them to the side. A wave slapped the bow and a Koryon cannon crashed down the deck, missing them by inches. It was bigger than a boar. It hit the mast, skidded off sideways, slapped some floundering soul across the chest. They heard him roar once before he flew into the frothing ocean. The sea reared up, smacked the ship like a bowling pin. They hit the bosun’s cabin hard, and they gasped as one person, the breath smashed out of their gullets.
Somehow the crow’s nest remained standing. From that impossible roost they saw Werringi, the lookout, stand up, defying the cataclysm. He loosed a hellish cry. “Ulvaram palaivattuuuu!” Reef incoming!
“No!” Revati fought her way to her feet. A wave clobbered her to her knees, but she spat into the deck and pushed herself back up. “Damn you, storm, you will not take my ship!”
Somehow, incredibly, there was calm. For one long moment no thundercrack sizzled the pregnant sky, no monster wave clouted their ship, no shower of rain drenched them yet further.
Then a horrible jarring crush as the pani met the maw of the reef, a deep snarling crunch as its granite teeth tore into the hull of the ship, a million nails on a million chalkboards, a million screams as the sailors surrendered to the sea, on and on that awful soulslicing bellow of “Palivattu! Palaivattuuuu!”. Revati cursed, the sky howled, Ponniyar gave up.
He felt the sea kiss him, and fell headfirst into oblivion.
Notes/Glossary
Pani: The workhorse ship of the cankam, or corporations, of the colonial era, used for transport and exploration. These were captained by nobles of the seafaring castes, some of whom were women.
Also, should I switch this to the writer's forum or to ASB? Some of the factors involved in this story lead to a nearly unrecognizable version of history, so a switch to the later forum might be neccessary.
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