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August 16th, 2012, 02:33 AM
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Some feedback please
Can I please get some feedback on my Deganawatha TL?
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August 18th, 2012, 05:50 PM
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ok...
Im looking some constructive criticism too my story. Im aware that my grammar is horrible, and spelling sucks. But anything people can point out to help me is welcome. Thanks.
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August 19th, 2012, 01:25 AM
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Looks good to me. Actually, it is very interesting. Although I saw a couple typos here and there.
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