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Midgard
September 30th, 2004, 04:02 PM
around 2 AM, August 31, 1939
Varna, capital of the Bulgarian theme

Constantine Vataces, duke of Bulgaria and Wallachia, was bored. The meeting has lasted well past midnight, and has nearly degenerated into placing blame for the recent outbreak of Bulgarian insurgency between the different officers. "Would the damn senile fool just die!" he thought of his uncle in Constantinople, now well into his seventies and still showing no signs of vacating the throne any time soon for his chosen successor. Why, he thought to himself, why do I have to put up with these imbeciles in some barbarian-infested province on the frontier, away from most of the comforts of the capital - the only city, as far as he and the most aristocratic of his command staff were concerned, that was worth living in.

The night was quiet, with the streets of Varna now sound asleep. He could see a lone fisherman's boat making its way towards the harbor, illuminated by a tall lighthouse. In the harbor itself, there were several steamers, and few of the newer "sea fortresses", covered in metal, porcupine's needles of their guns inspiring awe in the Emperor's subjects. Up in the sky, a watcher's air balloon overlooked the sleeping city, the Imperial eagle proudly emblazoned on its side.

He could not tell what happened for sure, but for a moment, he felt a strange sense of displacement, as if the outlines of the room grew blurry. Then, the first flash of light came...


3 AM, August 31st
Northern Carpathian Mountains

Leo Sgouros did not know what to think. At the first flash of light his patrol of four men was rushed out of the barracks and hastily sent to check if this was not some sort of Vlach trick... a mass explosion of some sort, far enough away to where the sound would not be heard, he thought. As he ordered his men to scout the area for any signs of the insurgents, or anything out of ordinary, thoughts rushed through his head of what could be happening.

He could not even possibly imagine anyone with enough power to do something of this magnitude, not in the world where the eternal Roman Empire stood for two millenia since Julius Caesar first crossed the River Rubicon, and for seventeen centuries since Constantine the Great adoped the teachings of Christ, and made his capital in the place where Europe meets Asia. Beyond the border, there was nothing for miles, just some wild Slavs and Magyars fighting each other and the Empire, as they have been for centuries. Nothing serious enough to mount a threat of any serious sort.

The patrol crossed into the foothills, descending from their mountain post. There was nary a sign, other than the sound of their horses' hooves on the ground. Yet, something was wrong. Maybe it was the sound of the nocturnal animals, the crickets, something in the trees that just did not seem quite like the path he and his men have traveled hundreds of times on routing patrols like this one.

Suddenly, a narrow band of smoke attracted his attention. Waving a hand to his men, he ordered them to slow down. There should not be any settlements for miles, he thought.

Trying to stay covered within the thin mountain vegetation, they dismounted and tried to move closer to the source of smoke. What they saw was something unexpected.

There should have been no one for miles, and yet there was a village, a small one at that, with several dozen houses. Moreso, the village looked like it stood there for a long time, and was not a makeshift construction of any sort. So amazed was he at this seemingly improbable turn of events that he almost did not notice the sound, much like an airship engine, only much quieter, approaching. He quietly gestured to his men to stay covered in the bushes and try to observe the source of the sound.

He saw something that looked like a munitions cart, but much smaller, and apparently propelled forward without horses or mules. Inside it were several men, by the appearance of them, soldiers of some sort. If all of this was going on here, on the border of the Imperial territory, without them finding out beforehand, he was in for some serious trouble from his superiors.

Suddenly, the vehicle stopped, with one of the men dismounting and appearing to be examining the location. One of them pointed, Sgouros noticed rather uncomfortably, in the direction of the bushes he and his men were hiding in. The strange soldier then hurried back to his vehicle, where three others emerged, all holding guns that looked unlike any make or model Sgouros expected to find near the border. Then, he realized what was happening. The soldier was pointing in the direction of their horses, which were pasturing not too far away - not unlike many of their wild or escaped brethren that were still relatively common in the area.

Sgouros caught a bit of the phrase, that did not sound like it was in any of the local Slavic or Magyar dialects. In fact it sounded almost like... he brushed away the thought.

Strange soldiers now appeared to be ready for combat, their weapons drawn. One of them spoke something loudly, and again Sgouros did not recognize a word, although something about the language seemed vaguely familiar. Then, one of the strange soldiers fired up in the air, as if warning any potential intruders to stay away. Another one, closer to the vehicle, spoke something into what looked like a small metal box.

Before Sgouros even knew what was happening, one of his men's nerves gave out, and he shot at the strange men. The bullet hit the side of the vehicle, alarming the men to the patrol's presense. The soldiers returned fire.

Sgouros noticed that their rifles seemed to fire much faster than those of his men. He shot at the group, and noticed that one of the strange soldiers fell down. The fallen man's comrades fired again, and this time one of the Imperial soldiers was hit. The man screamed uncontrollably.

The soldiers advanced closer, and this time they were able to see Sgouros' men through the cover of the bushes. With a corner of his eye, Sgouros saw one of his troop, a young recruit, run away towards their horses. Then, he aimed and fired, missing.

It was not long before the strange soldiers closed in, only a matter of few seconds. Among the sounds of weapons, it took Sgouros a second to realize that they were almost certainly neither Slavs nor Magyars. They were way too efficient, disciplined, clean cut; their weapons were of much higher quality, and the way they acted in combat together meant that they went through some very rigorous training. And as the bullet entered his head, he noticed with amazement that at the sleeves of the men's uniforms, there was an eagle, much like... then there was silence.

Grey Wolf
September 30th, 2004, 04:25 PM
I think its done very well, especially the ending to both parts, but I liked the whole of the feel of the second part, the village that should not and could not be there but was, the strange soldiers who were strangely scarily familiar in some way he would not let his mind handle... Very good :)

Grey Wolf

Midgard
September 30th, 2004, 04:36 PM
[OOC]: Thank you! I was definitely going for that kind of effect. I still would need to know what exactly is going on with respect to EU13 area, and who the Byzantines would encounter when trying to send message to Constantinople, but I would imagine the shock would be rather profound... :-)

Grey Wolf
September 30th, 2004, 04:52 PM
[OOC]: Thank you! I was definitely going for that kind of effect. I still would need to know what exactly is going on with respect to EU13 area, and who the Byzantines would encounter when trying to send message to Constantinople, but I would imagine the shock would be rather profound... :-)

The shock is going to be just as profound for my Russia as they are ruled from Constantinople in the ATL I am creating for it. They will suddenly find that the Regent in Saint Petersburg is in charge...or are they ? Where is the Tsesarevitch ? Where are the others in line for the throne ? Its all going to get very complicated !

At least I've almost finished writing the thing. I'm posting it in the AH forum as its an ATL in its own right, but then I'll repost here and then work out what the heck everyone's going to do when half the empire, most the government, most of the army and half of the navy disappears !

Best Regards
Grey Wolf

DominusNovus
September 30th, 2004, 05:21 PM
The Sultan of Constantinople is a very nice guy, I'm sure he'll be understanding. :cool:

Midgard
September 30th, 2004, 05:46 PM
The Sultan of Constantinople is a very nice guy, I'm sure he'll be understanding. :cool:

Could you please give some more details on the timeline etc that area is coming from? I could definitely imagine a major motion amongst the Byzantines to throw everything they have at recapturing what they perceive to be "their" capital (not to mention Grey Wolf's Russians), but depending on how (un)realistic it would be, they may or may not stand half a chance to even make a dent... then again, there might be some who would be more than willing to be accomodating if it serves their advantage... "byzantine" has not become a byword for intricate schemes for nothing :D

DominusNovus
September 30th, 2004, 06:53 PM
Could you please give some more details on the timeline etc that area is coming from? I could definitely imagine a major motion amongst the Byzantines to throw everything they have at recapturing what they perceive to be "their" capital (not to mention Grey Wolf's Russians), but depending on how (un)realistic it would be, they may or may not stand half a chance to even make a dent... then again, there might be some who would be more than willing to be accomodating if it serves their advantage... "byzantine" has not become a byword for intricate schemes for nothing :D
I'll probably have it up by tonight.

Grey Wolf
September 30th, 2004, 07:17 PM
Could you please give some more details on the timeline etc that area is coming from? I could definitely imagine a major motion amongst the Byzantines to throw everything they have at recapturing what they perceive to be "their" capital (not to mention Grey Wolf's Russians), but depending on how (un)realistic it would be, they may or may not stand half a chance to even make a dent... then again, there might be some who would be more than willing to be accomodating if it serves their advantage... "byzantine" has not become a byword for intricate schemes for nothing :D

The main problem my Russians are going to have is that they don't have an 'everything' to throw at it as the bulk o the army and a substantial portion of the fleet are in the non-ISOT'ed territories

I'm just trying to work out now what I do have...

Grey Wolf

Midgard
September 30th, 2004, 07:39 PM
Same with my Byzantines, the forces they do have are mostly stationed in the area to deal with frequent insurrections and potential disorganized attacks from disunited kingdoms abroad - they are mostly defensive in nature and not necessarily prepared to mount an offensive against determined resistance. However, the cause of seeing what both the Byzantines and their Bulgarian/Wallachian subjects perceive as the capital of not only the Empire, but of Orthodox Christianity, in the Moslem hands, might temporarily unite the disparate segments of population. This is not to say that should the Byzantines fail miserably, it could not lead to the violent overthrow of Byzantine authority over lands that still have major notions of independence...

The main problem my Russians are going to have is that they don't have an 'everything' to throw at it as the bulk o the army and a substantial portion of the fleet are in the non-ISOT'ed territories

I'm just trying to work out now what I do have...

Grey Wolf

DominusNovus
September 30th, 2004, 08:27 PM
However, the cause of seeing what both the Byzantines and their Bulgarian/Wallachian subjects perceive as the capital of not only the Empire, but of Orthodox Christianity, in the Moslem hands, might temporarily unite the disparate segments of population.
Just to piss your empire off more, I figure I should mention that the Pope resides in Constantinople in the Sultanate of Rome zone. While there are different sects, they all respect the authority of the Pope. Same goes for Islam and the Caliph.

BTW, I'm thinking of having a Caliph in the early days of Islam, after the conquest of constantinople, transport the Kaaba to Constantinople. Just to divide Islam even more. :D