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Diamond
July 26th, 2004, 06:28 AM
This is the start of my Kirghiz story.
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It is a little before four in the afternoon in Samarkand, capital of the Khaganate of Kirghiz. In the south, in the Hindiri and Tienshi mountain ranges, steam-powered trolleys pick their way along steel tracks spanning the gaps between peaks, bearing commuters from their day jobs in the vast cities of the plains below to their homes in the mountain suburbs. Beyond the mountains lay the dry deserts of the Border States – tribal dictatorships for the most part. Far too many of them owe allegiance to the fanatical Vijayanagara Empire, whose lands surround the Indian Ocean like a tumor.

In the east are further extensions of the Tienshis, blending into the Sayan, Nagor, and other ranges which line the land like wrinkles in a blanket, all the way to the Pacific Ocean.

To the north, along the shores of Lake Balkhash, the ancient farming plantations, some of which had been working the fertile soil for three centuries and more, begin to slow down from the day’s hectic pace. The evening bells in the temples will begin their gentle tolling soon, and the farmers, those who are religious men, will file in to hear the chants of the Buddhist priests.

Farther north are the endless plains, windswept and raw. Shallow lakes and rivers pepper the steppe, and between are the fields of the Khaganate Air Corps, where stately airships rove like sky-bound whales amid the flitting forms of fighter planes. Spread far and wide across the steppe are hundreds of towns and villages, many of which made a tidy profit catering to the needs of the air bases.

In the west is the salty Aral Sea, laying like a teardrop upon the land. Further on is the mighty Caspian, and beyond that is the province of Caucasia where, every day, millions of gallons of oil flow up from the earth like black blood.

The people of Kirghiz are a handsome folk, with bronze skin, inky black hair, and strong, wide-cheeked features. They can trace their lineage back to many different steppe tribes, from many different places across the continent. But tribal ties do not bear the importance they once did; they haven’t for a very long time. More important by far is pride in one’s nation, in the Khaganate, and in his majesty, Uzmur IV. Long years of plague and warfare have made it so.

In the capital, ancient Samarkand, the Khagan’s government ticks along at its stately pace. Centuries-old marble palaces, tombs, and museums dot the landscape. Near the Imperial Residence is the fifty-foot statue of Uzmur the Great, father of the Kirghiz Khaganate. The world-renowned Grazdhiy Baths occupies a whole city block on Gommor Street. The Botanical Gardens and the National Museum bookend the Baths, and across the street lies the Hall of Government, the beating heart of the city.

In this 250 year-old structure of stone and iron, graceful columns and stained-glass windows, the work of governing the nation goes on. Thousands of men and women work in its drafty halls, but on this day only a few scattered souls shuttle back and forth. It is Peaceday, the seventh and last day of the week, the last of two days of rest. In the morning, the workers will file back to their jobs, but for now the stately Hall is quiet.

All across the Khaganate, things are quiet. Families grill steppe elk steaks for their Peaceday evening barbeques. Netball matches are in progress on athletic fields across the nation, and in the bars and gambling dens, men with sweaty palms and greedy hearts lay their wagers on the outcomes. Children fly kites and chase their dogs through tree-lined streets.

It will all change in minutes.

Thousands of citizens will die, and thousands more will disappear forever, lost in the labyrinth of space and time.

It will all change in seconds.

GBW
July 26th, 2004, 06:45 AM
I think it's four.

Interesting setting. It's a shame what's going to happen when the Event occurs. There are Nazis in the Caucasus and when some air pirate bands set up bases in Tom's Russia and start preying on the Khaganate's airships and raiding the smaller communities... Maybe they'll be able to get some assistance from some neighboring country.

DuQuense
July 26th, 2004, 07:04 AM
http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/fixedform.html

Diamond
July 26th, 2004, 07:17 AM
Thank you thank you thank you, DuQuense! That's EXTREMELY helpful!

GBW: The Khaganate's Air Corps is fairly young, but already they are a seasoned military force. Asia is well-suited to wide-open air battles, and in their native TL, the Air Corps has already engaged in several large scale air battles with Vijayanagaran forces in Tibet and Afghanistan. The air pirates may not find them to be as easy pickings as they think they'll be. :)

Hopefully I can strike up some kind of alliance with Dacia; they're the nearest power that Kirghiz might possibly be able to work with...

GBW
July 26th, 2004, 07:31 AM
[QUOTE=Diamond]GBW: The Khaganate's Air Corps is fairly young, but already they are a seasoned military force. Asia is well-suited to wide-open air battles, and in their native TL, the Air Corps has already engaged in several large scale air battles with Vijayanagaran forces in Tibet and Afghanistan. The air pirates may not find them to be as easy pickings as they think they'll be. :)QUOTE]

Okay, but just keep in mind that the air pirates' technology will range from late 1930s to, say, mid 1970s and are formed around zeppelin aircraft carriers that will have AA weapon turrets and/or wire-guided missile batteries protecting the nacelles that hold the engines, more likely to be the former if they're operating so far from North America.

Also keep in mind that air pirates will accept letters of marque that will mean that particular group will leave Khaganate shipping alone but use their territory as a base to raid into surrounding countries, perhaps even against air pirates based in Russia. Unfortunately, they're rather indiscriminate and might also raid into the Kaukasus or other countries bordering the Khaganate (Not that I think the Khaganate will shed too many tears to see the Nazis raided by pirates). In fact, that might be a handy way for the Khaganate to share in the spoils of pirates looting some Kaukasus oil.

Diamond
July 31st, 2004, 06:23 AM
Over the Caspian Sea

Airman Third Class Akkri Hasul was the first person in the Khaganate of Kirghiz to witness the phenomenon that later came to be known as the Mosaic Event. It was a shame that he did not live to tell the tale; it was a story that would have enthralled the children that he would never father.

Hasul was in the forward lookout position of the Royal Airship Soroti, alternately shivering even in the depths of his heavy fleece-lined leather coat as gusts of frigid air blasted him, and nodding over the glowing coals in the brazier at his feet. He hated forward lookout, but it was as a result of falling asleep at his post last week back home at National Airfield Four outside of Sarai that had garnered him this unenviable duty, so he briskly slapped his cheeks, stood, and stamped his feet. He winced as a particularly cold burst of air snuck greedy invisible fingers under the edge of his coat.

He was looking forlornly at nothing in particular, his hands shoved into his armpits, when It happened.

One moment there was nothing below but the afternoon sunlight gleaming off the steel waters of the Caspian, and in front, a faint smudge on the horizon that was Caucasia. Between one breath and the next, a wall of fire appeared less than twenty yards ahead of the Soroti. It stretched north and south as far as Hasul could see, bisecting the air and water like a deadly curtain. Even as Hasul watched, his mouth hanging open, a large bird blundered into the wall and was consumed by rapidly shifting blue, violet, and scarlet flames.

Hasul had a second or two to inhale the sickening stench of burning feathers before the airship ran headlong into the wall and exploded. The incinerated fragments of the Soroti rained down into the waves for long minutes afterward.

Town of Kimid, 40 miles south of Samarkand

Kameer Andu was admiring a thumb-sized ruby he’d liberated from the wall safe before him when he heard a deep-throated growl behind him.

Looking slowly over his shoulder, he stifled a curse. In the door was a huge mastiff, strands of drool dangling from its inch-long fangs. Even as the dog lunged towards him, Andu leapt to the top of the mahogany desk which dominated the room. He distinctly heard the beast’s teeth clack shut bare inches from his heel. Oh Sweet Buddha, he thought. What kind of bastard keeps a monster like that in his house? He ignored the fact that it wasn’t his house to begin with; he was there to rob it.

The top of the desk was a good three and half feet off the floor and its wide expanse allowed Andu to keep his toes out of harm’s way, but eventually the dog would wise up and realize that it could take him with a running leap.

Andu danced back and forth, one hand braced against the massive iron chandelier overhead to steady himself. It swung gently back and forth, creaking like a ship in a storm.

The dog suddenly raced around to the other side of the desk – the side with the chair. “Oh shit,” the thief hissed. Sure enough, the animal was trying to clamber up onto the chair and from there onto the desk.

Andu turned and leapt, trusting in his speed to propel him out of the room before the dog caught him. He was too late; even as he jumped, he felt fangs sink like fiery daggers into his ankle. The pain was indescribable. He fell heavily, slamming an elbow into the desk-top. He barely felt it over the pain in his foot.

Suddenly the room was bathed in unearthly blue and red fire; Andu heard a high-pitched yelp and then the pain was suddenly gone. His relief lasted only seconds though. Looking over his shoulder he beheld a wall of fire which seemed to cut right through the room. When it disappeared, half the room went with it. The afternoon sky shone blue above, and a warm breeze tickled him.

What’s going on here?

It was his last coherent thought. Looking back once more he saw that he, too, had been cleanly bisected by the flames. The dog and its fangs were gone, but so was Andu from the waist down.

Northern farmlands, 500 miles north of Dhimor

It is a dry summer, Orata Sirsann thought needlessly as she kicked a dry and cracked clump of earth. The Ovham Plantation stretched all around her, as far as the eye could see. Orata’s family had worked its fields, for one employer or another, for the last 200 years.

Orata herself had no desire to grow corn and wheat the rest of her life; lately she had been contemplating running away to Samarkand, the glorious heart of the Khaganate. There, she would be free to live her own life. She could get a real job, even go to school! The possibilities seemed endless. Of course her father would have a heart attack if he knew what his eldest daughter was contemplating. But she was eighteen now, a woman in the eyes of the law, if not her father, for most of three months.

What could papa really do if I decided to go to Samarkand? She was afraid, but also more than a little eager to find out.

The girl idly kicked at loose stones and tiny white flowers growing along the stone-flagged path leading to the main house. Out in the fields, she could see her little brother Isham running up and down between the rows of late summer corn, his pet hound at his heels. She grinned, but the grin quickly slipped from her face as a massive wall of flame appeared from out of nowhere, blanking out the northern horizon as abruptly as a shutting door. She could see flickers of lightning playing around and through it, sparking grass fires in the dry, rain-starved plains.

She dimly heard Isham yelling, but couldn’t drag her eyes away from the unbelievable sight. And then, as quickly as it had appeared, it was gone. From all around her, Orata heard shouts and cries of panic.

I wonder what that was? She thought. The answer would change her life in ways she could not even begin to imagine.

tom
July 31st, 2004, 01:28 PM
Interesting view of being bisected by a border!