View Full Version : Change the Quote Game.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
January 30th, 2012, 12:02 AM
The idea of the game is simple. I post a famouse Historical Quote. The next person makes a single revision to it. They can remove a word, add a word, replace a word or change the intention of the sentence (change from statement to question, move a comma, etc.). Once they do so, they must give an ATL meaning to the new quote. Once the quote has been changed ten times, a new OTL quote may be posted by the tenth revisionist.
Here we go.
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in infamy—the United States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Japan.
MadMaper 13
January 30th, 2012, 12:32 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in infamy—the United States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Australasia.
The Imperial Pacific Navy of Australasia Launched a surprise attack on the U.S fleet in San Francisco Bay after several American backed coup attempts on several Pacific Nations within the Empire of Australasia. This is believed to be one of the most bold and stupidest moves in History. It is known to be one of the leading causes to the War of All World Nations.
John Fredrick Parker
January 30th, 2012, 12:33 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1931—a date which will live in infamy—the United States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Japan.
The US tries to intervene during the Manchuria incident to pressure for a peaceful resolution; Japan has other ideas.
With malice toward none; with charity for all; with firmness in the right, as God gives us to see the right, let us strive on to finish the work we are in; to bind up the nation's wounds; to care for him who shall have borne the battle, and for his widow, and his orphan—to do all which may achieve and cherish a just and lasting peace, among ourselves, and with all nations.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
January 30th, 2012, 12:41 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1931—a date which will live in infamy—the United States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Japan.
The US tries to intervene during the Manchuria incident to pressure for a peaceful resolution; Japan has other ideas.
With malice toward none; with charity for all; with firmness in the right, as God gives us to see the right, let us strive on to finish the work we are in; to bind up the nation's wounds; to care for him who shall have borne the battle, and for his widow, and his orphan—to do all which may achieve and cherish a just and lasting peace, among ourselves, and with all nations.
You add the new quote after the tenth revision. Also you were ninja'd. :(
Badshah
January 30th, 2012, 12:45 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in infamy—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Australasia.
The Confederate States, long known for their evil ways, and their continuing usage of slavery was attacked by the Empire of Australasia, as the pariah state commenced harassing Australasian citizens in the country. The attack was prompted by the CSA's refusal to apoplogize for these incidents, and escalated by their refusal to engage in trade with Australasia.
zert
January 30th, 2012, 01:32 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in infamy—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Australasia..
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in infamy—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of United States.
After nearly a hundred years after their defeat by the Rebellious forces of the South, the combined might of the Empire struck at Norfolk. The land forces went on a blitz towards Richmond as well, beginning the war to make all of North America free.
Evan
January 30th, 2012, 04:27 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of United States.
US President Jacob Lincoln, grandson of Abraham Lincoln, responding to the Confederate President's statement.
Young Lochinvar
January 30th, 2012, 10:38 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of United States.
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air weapons of the Empire of United States.
Utilising the latest in un-manned drones and missiles the Empire of United States struck at the centre of the Confederacy's heartland without risking their own soldiers in open battle.
Barbarossa Rotbart
January 30th, 2012, 10:48 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1941—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Mexico.
From the speech given by Maximilian III, Emperor of Mexico, after the Mexican surprise attack on the Confederate forces, which were completely annihilated.The was the end of cold war between the Empire and the CSA.
Maniakes
January 30th, 2012, 08:32 PM
July 8, 1853—a date which will live in infamy—the United States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Japan.
In the 1840s, the Tokugawa Shogunate adopts a program of preparing to defend their isolationist stance by force, foreseeing attempts by Western powers to demand trading rights. In particular, the Shogunate invests heavily in modern cannons and mortars (purchased through the Dutch East India Company, which had exclusive trading rights with Japan at the time), and even a few hot-air balloons, to be used for artillery spotting and for dropping iron grenades onto the decks of enemy ships.
The Perry expedition is ambushed and their ships disabled and captured. One survivor is sent back to tell the tale.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
January 30th, 2012, 10:38 PM
In the 1840s, the Tokugawa Shogunate adopts a program of preparing to defend their isolationist stance by force, foreseeing attempts by Western powers to demand trading rights. In particular, the Shogunate invests heavily in modern cannons and mortars (purchased through the Dutch East India Company, which had exclusive trading rights with Japan at the time), and even a few hot-air balloons, to be used for artillery spotting and for dropping iron grenades onto the decks of enemy ships.
The Perry expedition is ambushed and their ships disabled and captured. One survivor is sent back to tell the tale.
The point of the game is to edit the already edited quote.
Maniakes
January 30th, 2012, 10:52 PM
The point of the game is to edit the already edited quote.
Whoops, sorry! Let me try again...
Yesterday, December 7, 1864—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Mexico.
In reprisal for Confederate forces raiding Chihuahuan and Sonoran towns for supplies, and in an effort to shore up his position with a short, victorious war, Emperor Maximilian declared war on the Confederacy and launched an assault across the Rio Grande, spearheaded by hot-air balloons and riverine warships.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
January 30th, 2012, 11:31 PM
Two More changes, then a new quote may begin. :)
Evan
January 31st, 2012, 12:32 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1864—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and accidentally attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Mexico.
During the US Civil War, Emperor Maximillian's forces fire some rockets and naval shells at the wrong side of the Rio Grande. Newspapers in Europe play it as huge buffoonery.
XNM
January 31st, 2012, 02:12 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1864—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and accidentally attacked by naval and air forces of the Confederate States of America.
Celebrating the Confederate Civil War.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
January 31st, 2012, 02:14 AM
Yesterday, December 7, 1864—a date which will live in eternal glory—the Confederate States of America was suddenly and accidentally attacked by naval and air forces of the Confederate States of America.
Celebrating the Confederate Civil War.
You are the tenth editor, you can post the next Quote. :)
Alternatehistorybuff5341
February 8th, 2012, 04:03 AM
Fine I'll do it. :p
Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
May 10th, 2012, 02:04 AM
Anyone? Anyone at all?
Axeman
May 10th, 2012, 02:11 AM
Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
mrsandman
May 10th, 2012, 02:16 AM
Four hundred and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
Badshah
May 10th, 2012, 02:18 AM
Four hundred and seven years ago our mothers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
Zuvarq
May 10th, 2012, 02:23 AM
Four hundred million and seven years ago our mothers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
Turquoise Blue
May 10th, 2012, 02:27 AM
Four hundred million and seven years ago our mothers brought forth on this world, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
dilbert719
May 10th, 2012, 02:30 AM
Four hundred million and seven years ago our mothers brought forth on this world, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that no men are created equal.
Zuvarq
May 10th, 2012, 02:30 AM
Four hundred million and seven years ago our mothers brought forth on this world, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that no dinosaurs are created equal.
Turquoise Blue
May 10th, 2012, 02:59 AM
Four hundred million and seven years ago our mothers brought forth on this world, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that no dinosaurs are born equal.
Remicas
May 10th, 2012, 03:09 AM
Four hundred million and seven years ago our mothers brought forth on this world, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that no dinosaurs are born feral.
Orville_third
May 10th, 2012, 04:45 AM
Four hundred million and seven seconds ago our mothers brought forth on this world, a new nation, conceived in socialism, and dedicated to the proposition that no dinosaurs are born feral.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
May 10th, 2012, 04:52 AM
Orville, I believe it is your turn to post a new quote. :) Every ten changes, a new quote is posted.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
July 28th, 2012, 10:53 PM
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character.
papal duke
July 28th, 2012, 11:03 PM
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their species.
Danth
July 28th, 2012, 11:10 PM
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, but by the content of their species.
Badshah
July 28th, 2012, 11:21 PM
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, nor by the content of their species.
Patton
July 28th, 2012, 11:50 PM
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, norby the origin of their species.
Abhakhazia
July 28th, 2012, 11:56 PM
I want a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, norby the originof their species.
Turquoise Blue
July 29th, 2012, 12:01 AM
I wanta dream that my four hundred little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, nor by the origin of their species.
Badshah
July 29th, 2012, 12:51 AM
I want a dream that my four hundred little children will one day eat in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, nor by the origin of their species.
Victor Hatherley
July 29th, 2012, 12:54 AM
I want an assurance that my four hundred little children will one day eat in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, nor by the origin of their species.
ChineseDrone#48295857
July 29th, 2012, 12:58 AM
I want an assurance that my four hundred little children will one day eat in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, nor by the origin of their species.
The New World Order want an assurancethat my four hundred little children will one day eat in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, nor by the origin of their species.
Patton
July 29th, 2012, 01:33 AM
The New World Order wants an assurancethat my four hundred little children will one day eat in a fast-food chain where they will not be judged by the color of their scales, nor by the origin of their species
New Quote:
Ask not want your country can do for you, but what you can do for your country.
Abhakhazia
July 29th, 2012, 01:37 AM
Ask not what your country can do for you and what you can do for your country.
metastasis_d
July 29th, 2012, 04:55 AM
Ask not what your country can do for you and what you can do for your country.
Ask not what your country can do for you nor what you can do for your country.
(Take THAT, sentence fragment! :p)
Badshah
July 29th, 2012, 05:02 AM
Debate not what your country can do for you nor what you can do for your country.
Alternatehistorybuff5341
September 4th, 2012, 12:48 AM
Debate not what your God can do for you, nor what you can do for your God.
metastasis_d
September 4th, 2012, 01:31 AM
Debate not what your God can do for you, nor what you can do for your God.
Decide not what your God can do for you, nor what you can do for your God.
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